Charity
An act of kindness makes doer and receiver feel good.3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This poem show us the simple and best way to live. The Biblical
Golden Rule. If more of us lived this was there would be less war
and violence.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Hi,
This poem show us the simple and best way to live. The Biblical
Golden Rule. If more of us lived this was there would be less war
and violence.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the weekend
Joan
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the read and feedback.
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Don't mention it.
Joan
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
I agree it probably made me feel better than it did the receiver when I did all of my acts of kindness as a younger person
I don't know how many homeless people I let stay with me. And then homeless are going through dumpsters. I'd give $20 to them. And then they were homeless at McDonald's and I bought them breakfast.
I've always been generous. Sometimes to my detriment because I go without, but it's important to help other people.
Nowadays, since I'm disabled I give to charity mostly but there is a large homeless population in the city I'm in. with caregivers help. I've dropped off peanut butter, jelly bread, even cake for them.
Nicely written
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
I agree it probably made me feel better than it did the receiver when I did all of my acts of kindness as a younger person
I don't know how many homeless people I let stay with me. And then homeless are going through dumpsters. I'd give $20 to them. And then they were homeless at McDonald's and I bought them breakfast.
I've always been generous. Sometimes to my detriment because I go without, but it's important to help other people.
Nowadays, since I'm disabled I give to charity mostly but there is a large homeless population in the city I'm in. with caregivers help. I've dropped off peanut butter, jelly bread, even cake for them.
Nicely written
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Wonderful acts of kindness. I think the giver often derives greater benefit than the receiver. We need more kindness in the world. Especially during election times. Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from jessizero
I think this senryu for the prompt was great. You got the syllable counts and subject matter right, and your message was inspiring. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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I think this senryu for the prompt was great. You got the syllable counts and subject matter right, and your message was inspiring. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Appreciated.