Quid Pro Quo
It is better to give than to receive. Acts 20-352 total reviews
Comment from Bryce 1
How true this is, how often I forget. All the time, I sink back into myself and start to feel like I need more in this life, when in reality I should be giving myself away to anyone in need. This poem is fantastic and although I've read about 15 so far today, I have resonated the most with this one, and it's not even close.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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How true this is, how often I forget. All the time, I sink back into myself and start to feel like I need more in this life, when in reality I should be giving myself away to anyone in need. This poem is fantastic and although I've read about 15 so far today, I have resonated the most with this one, and it's not even close.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Very generous comments, Bryce. Many thanks.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this senryu for the writing prompt. I think your message was perfect, and you got the syllable counts right. I also liked your title. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed this senryu for the writing prompt. I think your message was perfect, and you got the syllable counts right. I also liked your title. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.