Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 167 "Facebook Filter Freaks"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have often wondered about FaceBook. I don't understand why people want to air their dirty laundry for all to see. I like to try to hide mine. LOL. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
  |
I have often wondered about FaceBook. I don't understand why people want to air their dirty laundry for all to see. I like to try to hide mine. LOL. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
-
Thank you for your review, Barbara. Yup, discretion is valuable!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed your poem. The comparison to fireflies is so clever! For me you are showing the difference between appearance and action. This is such a thought provoking read. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
|
I enjoyed your poem. The comparison to fireflies is so clever! For me you are showing the difference between appearance and action. This is such a thought provoking read. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
-
Thank you for your review, Michael. Any suggestions for improvement?
Comment from lyenochka
Oooh! I like your social commentary on social media. Life on Facebook is pretty superficial and yes, they are like "virtue signalers" (one 'l' not two, per the editor of this FS textbox) and then they "Go dark before the fight."
Great job with your meter and rhyme.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
|
Oooh! I like your social commentary on social media. Life on Facebook is pretty superficial and yes, they are like "virtue signalers" (one 'l' not two, per the editor of this FS textbox) and then they "Go dark before the fight."
Great job with your meter and rhyme.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
-
Thank you for your review, Lyenochka. AND.... thank you for the Treasure Chest. I didn't know you could promote OTHER people's work. Also, thanks for the spelling correction. I updated it with the correct spelling.
-
I never know if it's a British spelling but I know you're in WA. Lol.
I was hoping you'd get more reviews!
Comment from GregoryCody
Very nice! I like the rhythm. The rhymes are so fluid, not forced at all. The flow is fun and cadence on point. And the Message, the substance, is fantastic. Those keyboard warriors lol. WELL DONE!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
 |
Very nice! I like the rhythm. The rhymes are so fluid, not forced at all. The flow is fun and cadence on point. And the Message, the substance, is fantastic. Those keyboard warriors lol. WELL DONE!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
-
Thank you for your review, GregoryCody.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We live in an unusual world just now where social media has control of our minds and opinions and persuades us to support or deny sectors of society and promote or downgrade at will, a poignant write, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
|
We live in an unusual world just now where social media has control of our minds and opinions and persuades us to support or deny sectors of society and promote or downgrade at will, a poignant write, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
-
Thank you for your review, Dolly. Any suggestions for improvement?
Comment from patcelaw
This is nicely written and easy to listen to. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and also wish you a very good evening and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
|
This is nicely written and easy to listen to. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and also wish you a very good evening and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
-
Thank you for your review, Patricia. Any suggestions for improvement?