The Man in the Moon
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Comment from Dr. Nad
I think somethings require an imagination as you said in the authors notes. I guess I don't have imagination. I don't see your face anywhere but I'm glad you did it was a cute little pond and I'm sure you have had some good conversations with the man in the moon.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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I think somethings require an imagination as you said in the authors notes. I guess I don't have imagination. I don't see your face anywhere but I'm glad you did it was a cute little pond and I'm sure you have had some good conversations with the man in the moon.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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thank you! I'm afraid no conversations with the moon since I was young, but even through the cloudy haze around his mouth, and up the right cheek, and his big, black eyes, I could see a rough version of his face. First, I saw the round O at the bottom, center, that looked like he was blowing smoke.
Anyway, many thanks for reading my poem.
Katharine
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It was my was pleasure to read and privilege to review.
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thank you.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Well who knew! I really do see what you're talking about. The poem is very imaginative and tells a story clearly very good imagery. I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Well who knew! I really do see what you're talking about. The poem is very imaginative and tells a story clearly very good imagery. I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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you did see the face?? That's terrific. I love to try to find the face in a full moon.
Thanks for reading and for your vey nice comments!
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
i enjoyed this humorous look at the moon. Your light touch here, along with the rhythm and rhyme makes this a worthy contest entry. I hope it does well.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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i enjoyed this humorous look at the moon. Your light touch here, along with the rhythm and rhyme makes this a worthy contest entry. I hope it does well.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Verna. That's mighty nice of you!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed this poem. It was imaginative and interesting. I like the picture of the moon. I never thought about thr moon much. Very well written
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed this poem. It was imaginative and interesting. I like the picture of the moon. I never thought about thr moon much. Very well written
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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thanks, Brenda. Your very nice comment is much appreciated.
When you were little did you not sing:
Oh, Mr. Moon, Moon,
bright and silvery moon
Won'tcha please shine down on me, etc etc? :)
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No, I didn't
Comment from mermaids
I like the fantasy feel of your words. As a person who sees faces in quite a few places, I can see a face on the moon and I like how you describe talking to him. Excellent poem about the moon that takes the reader to a place of wonder and delight.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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I like the fantasy feel of your words. As a person who sees faces in quite a few places, I can see a face on the moon and I like how you describe talking to him. Excellent poem about the moon that takes the reader to a place of wonder and delight.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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thank you so much for your very nice comments.
Most times I do see the face, though sometimes it stretches the imagination a bit. :)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I saw just the moon you would wish in a picture around ten nights or so ago. The face was perfect as is your poem. You should do well in the contest as you bring back sweet childhood memories of talking to the man in the moon.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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I saw just the moon you would wish in a picture around ten nights or so ago. The face was perfect as is your poem. You should do well in the contest as you bring back sweet childhood memories of talking to the man in the moon.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Oh, I wish I'd had a picture of it. This one looks like he should have a cigarette in his hand. I really do think it looks like he's blowing smoke. :)
Anyway, thanks for your very kind words!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
fun poem in Korea they say that there is a rabbit in the Moon a famous 19th century drunk poet drown after jumping into lake as the rabbit in the moon beckoned him he left behind his last poem about seeing the rabbit.in the moon
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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fun poem in Korea they say that there is a rabbit in the Moon a famous 19th century drunk poet drown after jumping into lake as the rabbit in the moon beckoned him he left behind his last poem about seeing the rabbit.in the moon
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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hmm, That's a new one on me, and rather sad. I have seen the moon at times when he looks like he's smiling. This one (to me) is definitely an "o." Thanks for reading and for your interesting story.
Comment from royowen
I love the artwork I've seen once this week, and it's striking pose, you have made your intelligent, imaginative point so well I congratulate you, on your writing ability and your wit, well done, blessings. Roy
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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I love the artwork I've seen once this week, and it's striking pose, you have made your intelligent, imaginative point so well I congratulate you, on your writing ability and your wit, well done, blessings. Roy
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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thanks, Roy! Your comments are much appreciated!
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Bless you
Comment from Nicki.B
I really enjoy thos poem about the moon. It's so much fun and very imaginative!
The image is beautiful and works so well with the poem.
Well done and best of luck with the contest
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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I really enjoy thos poem about the moon. It's so much fun and very imaginative!
The image is beautiful and works so well with the poem.
Well done and best of luck with the contest
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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thanks, Nicki!
Could you see the face?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We tend to humanise everything in life, even the moon and we have been fascinated by it for centuries, I enjoyes your musings about the man on the moon, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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We tend to humanise everything in life, even the moon and we have been fascinated by it for centuries, I enjoyes your musings about the man on the moon, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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thanks, Dolly.
So far, nobody has said they saw the face. hmmm
