What is Temptation?
A poem about temptation, what it is, and if it is truly bad.4 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written contest entry and I wish you the very best in the contest. It is true that we are all tempted one pointer another in our lives maybe more than once maybe many times. Patricia.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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This is a very well written contest entry and I wish you the very best in the contest. It is true that we are all tempted one pointer another in our lives maybe more than once maybe many times. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review, Patricia!
Comment from wilkswrites
Amen!
I enjoyed your poem. It speaks truth.
I really liked the font that you used as well.
One error: Temptation creates us in different forms. (in us)
Another: though; should it be viewed as bad? (semi colon)
Good job!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Amen!
I enjoyed your poem. It speaks truth.
I really liked the font that you used as well.
One error: Temptation creates us in different forms. (in us)
Another: though; should it be viewed as bad? (semi colon)
Good job!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review/feedback! I appreciate your tips!
Comment from mermaids
I like your theme of how temptation is not all bad. You give two sides to the words which gives it equal time. You have a smooth flow of words and lines and I like how your words are presented like cursive writing. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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I like your theme of how temptation is not all bad. You give two sides to the words which gives it equal time. You have a smooth flow of words and lines and I like how your words are presented like cursive writing. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your review! I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem as well as its presentation.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how your poem explores temptation. You show how complex our desires can be. I love how you've approached this theme from different angles. This is a beautifully written and so thoughtful. Great job.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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I love how your poem explores temptation. You show how complex our desires can be. I love how you've approached this theme from different angles. This is a beautifully written and so thoughtful. Great job.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review, Michael! I am thrilled that you enjoyed my poem!