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Sandra's Lover

Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Aliss finds a hidden room"
A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is such a gripping piece! I was completely drawn into the suspense you created. The way you've built the atmosphere, especially with Aliss's inner turmoil and the mysterious discoveries, kept me on edge. It's wonderfully written and leaves me eager to know what happens next. Great job!

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
    Michael thank you for your input - more chapters to come! I have actually written 46 so I am trying to catch up in the uploads.
Comment from prettybluebirds
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This chapter caught my attention and held it from start to finish. I have yet to read any previous writings concerning this story, but I will look some of it up if I get the time. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
    Thank you - the book has 46 chapters so far. more to be uploaded.