Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your writing powerfully captures the raw emotions of a heart wrenching moment. The imagery works so well. The leather coat and the barely pregnant belly adds so much to this. This is a well written glimpse into a difficult situation.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
Thanks so much for your kind review.
Comment from
Begin Again
They both made mistakes! She shouldn't have been involved with a married man and he shouldn't turn his back on a child that he helped conceive. Bad decisions build one by one!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024