I Was Stung Too
A story about a boy6 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
So, the little boy thought he was stung in the ear, but he wasn't. So, then he went to his friends house and did get stung in the ear by a bee. A self fulfilling prophecy. And Mom got it in the arm, and dad in the leg. Togetherness. Karen
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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So, the little boy thought he was stung in the ear, but he wasn't. So, then he went to his friends house and did get stung in the ear by a bee. A self fulfilling prophecy. And Mom got it in the arm, and dad in the leg. Togetherness. Karen
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Hi Karen. Thank you for the review. Also, all 3 of them. Love, Brenda
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Comment from jessizero
This was a fun story in very few words. Poor Bobby! I got a kick out of the irony in this piece. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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This was a fun story in very few words. Poor Bobby! I got a kick out of the irony in this piece. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your nice review,!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story is both charming and humorous! I loved the way you captured Bobby's frantic reaction and the twist with the bee sting at Johnny's house. The details really brought the scene to life and made me smile. Great job on weaving in that fun twist.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Your story is both charming and humorous! I loved the way you captured Bobby's frantic reaction and the twist with the bee sting at Johnny's house. The details really brought the scene to life and made me smile. Great job on weaving in that fun twist.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your great review. a person give me a 3, which I never had before because she didn't understand it. Thank you so much again. I appreciate it.
Comment from Bill Schott
What I am getting from this story, is that Bobby wants to have the attention without the actual trauma that comes with a sting from a honeybee. ........
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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What I am getting from this story, is that Bobby wants to have the attention without the actual trauma that comes with a sting from a honeybee. ........
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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That's right. Bobby wanted to be like everyone else who got stung. But in the end he got stung anyway. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Caperton Tissot
I think the point of this story is that Bobby felt left out and so wanted to be stung also, or maybe it is just the irony of not getting stung at home but I find it unclear. Love the photo that goes with it and the writing and word choice are good.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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I think the point of this story is that Bobby felt left out and so wanted to be stung also, or maybe it is just the irony of not getting stung at home but I find it unclear. Love the photo that goes with it and the writing and word choice are good.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the review. This is based on a true story. My grandson said he was stung but he wasn't. Just added a little twist to the end.
Comment from Begin Again
Gotta watch those bees! They will make nightmares come true! My son is allergic and bee stings aren't fun! Great little story and a lesson for Bobby.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Gotta watch those bees! They will make nightmares come true! My son is allergic and bee stings aren't fun! Great little story and a lesson for Bobby.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the nice review.
