2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 suite, Sleep at Eventide, has the proper formatting and imagines the days trials taking a sea cruise as the bod rests and collects strength for when the day arrives.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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This 5-7-5 suite, Sleep at Eventide, has the proper formatting and imagines the days trials taking a sea cruise as the bod rests and collects strength for when the day arrives.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a beautiful 5/7/5 poem, Gypsy. You have a special talent in finding just the right picture to mirror your words. I love the idea of the sailboat carrying wishing stars and the sun. I love this.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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This is a beautiful 5/7/5 poem, Gypsy. You have a special talent in finding just the right picture to mirror your words. I love the idea of the sailboat carrying wishing stars and the sun. I love this.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I loved your poem, and every one of your presentations are perfect, but for some reason the color combinations you used this time have struck me as being phenomenal. Wonderful job.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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I loved your poem, and every one of your presentations are perfect, but for some reason the color combinations you used this time have struck me as being phenomenal. Wonderful job.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words. I'm happy you like the presentation. I spend a long time with my presentations but I really enjoy.
Gypsy hugs
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When I try to put something together, it looks like I just threw it there.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy------that's all I need, to get seasick while I'm sleeping, motion sickness during the day and seasickness at night, give me a break!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy------that's all I need, to get seasick while I'm sleeping, motion sickness during the day and seasickness at night, give me a break!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Stunning portrait and beautiful words tgat speak of the evening as minds and hearts are put to rest. Then with sunup comes the promise of new things as we look ahead.
Thanks for sharing. Hope you're having a great day.
RJ
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Stunning portrait and beautiful words tgat speak of the evening as minds and hearts are put to rest. Then with sunup comes the promise of new things as we look ahead.
Thanks for sharing. Hope you're having a great day.
RJ
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely presentation and I like how you show the narrator measures her day based on where her beloved's ship is and the brightness of the sun comes with his return.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Lovely presentation and I like how you show the narrator measures her day based on where her beloved's ship is and the brightness of the sun comes with his return.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ marival ❤️
Comment from royowen
I love this you have marked so perceptively the two contrasting evening as setting sail and the morning when the world is waking up to a brand new optimistic day, beautifully written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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I love this you have marked so perceptively the two contrasting evening as setting sail and the morning when the world is waking up to a brand new optimistic day, beautifully written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
Growing up, I lived near a creek that lead to a bay. I remember laying there at night listening to the sailboats as they moored their way from the docks. The clinking of the ropes against the metal mast. It was a wonderful sound. Your poem reminded me of that. Gretchen
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Growing up, I lived near a creek that lead to a bay. I remember laying there at night listening to the sailboats as they moored their way from the docks. The clinking of the ropes against the metal mast. It was a wonderful sound. Your poem reminded me of that. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Neonewman
This is a dreamy piece you have delivered, Gypsy, with beautiful artwork to boot. Thank you for sharing your talent, expressed so passionately.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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This is a dreamy piece you have delivered, Gypsy, with beautiful artwork to boot. Thank you for sharing your talent, expressed so passionately.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
great imagery of sailing in the evening and returning at daybreak
one suggestion i have is maybe to try a synonym for sailboat and shore?
like...
sleep at eventide
your ship is leaving shore
carrying wishing stars
awake at sunup
your sailboat arrived at sands
carrying the bright sun
just a few thoughts for you to splash around...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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great imagery of sailing in the evening and returning at daybreak
one suggestion i have is maybe to try a synonym for sailboat and shore?
like...
sleep at eventide
your ship is leaving shore
carrying wishing stars
awake at sunup
your sailboat arrived at sands
carrying the bright sun
just a few thoughts for you to splash around...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy