Comment from
Patty Mazzurco
This snippet is really gripping and has a dramatic flair! I love the urgency and the stark consequences of the mission you've described. The tension builds effectively with the imagery of Earth cracking and exploding.
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Comment from
royowen
I think at the end of earth's days I guess this could actually be like this I'm afraid, a great entry in this contest, short and sweet, those left on earth couldn't possibly survive, only the ones in the space ships, well done, blessings Roy
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