Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I think you took this "naked" contest a little literally! haha. I really enjoyed how you balanced light heartedness with deeper reflections on growing up. Your approach is refreshingly candid! Great job!

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2024

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

I don't think you left a metaphor out of this poem. All though it is a handful of a project. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2024

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

I have to say you took this more in the direction I was expecting when I first read the contest title of Let's Get Naked!
I'm a little surprised your entry wasn't disqualified because you didn't follow rules 2. and 3. (Author's note and 12pt font)
You have succeeded in educating me in a few phrases I'd never heard before.

Best of luck in the contest!
Julie

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2024

Comment from Esther Brown

Exceptional

I am sorry, but it made me laugh. Boys. Yikes. I did not know there were so many ways to describe this particular action. Girls don't talk about this kind of thing.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2024