Winner!
A real life-changer3 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
very funny. There are quite the number of women out there who would be very envious of your lottery winner. Great set-up and a very funny delivery. Kudos
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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very funny. There are quite the number of women out there who would be very envious of your lottery winner. Great set-up and a very funny delivery. Kudos
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Very generous, Kaiku. Much appreciated.
Comment from RodG
This story begins slowly and ends with a wallop. You set the scene well and have your reader worrying about the wife's lateness with Joe. Excellent use of dialog at the end. This should be a strong contender in the contest. Rod
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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This story begins slowly and ends with a wallop. You set the scene well and have your reader worrying about the wife's lateness with Joe. Excellent use of dialog at the end. This should be a strong contender in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Many thanks, Rod.
Comment from Begin Again
Whoa! Not exactly what Joe expected! But I guess Jane had had enough and her chance for freedom was here. Great choice for the contest. I wish you luck.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Whoa! Not exactly what Joe expected! But I guess Jane had had enough and her chance for freedom was here. Great choice for the contest. I wish you luck.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Carol. Have a good day.
