Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

And some times that birth is the hardest one we've every faced...it's there, just out of reach, but it won't come into focus. And then suddenly, a light comes on and our fingers can't type fast enough. It's awesome when one is born!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024

It's been awhile that a real good one was formed in my miniscule brain.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

At first, I thought you were calling out from the loom and that you were trying to get help about being born.

I read it again and now I realize that it's an idea that's about to be born. An idea that will help you figure out how to keep living rather than failing in life. And I'm thinking that might be symbolic that you're not really dying but you're soul or your, psyche.dying

I can't really help except to tell you to not give up. I know this is fiction so when I see you I mean the person who's talking in your story

I enjoyed reading your story

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024

I would have done a better story but I did not have any ideas.

reply by Pamusart on 12-Aug-2024

You're fine.