Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

I don't understand a thing about this and I am getting a migraine. I am sure you did it perfectly fine. But it is all too much for me. Have a great weekend. I am still putting stuff up.
And hanging pictures. Karen

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024

I appreciate the spirit of reciprocity, but you really don't have to review every single thing I write. Sometimes you just don't feel the post, as in this case. Thanks for the kind review, anyway.

Comment from SimianSavant

Excellent

This might be a popular entry in the contest. You are up against a potential problem though: it seems like this entry was submitted twice by accident. So you probably got billed twice for the contest entry, AND there may be two entries that show up in booth, which will divide votes for you and prevent you from having any shot at winning. I suggest messaging the site and asking for them to fix that for you. You should also get a refund for the duplicate entry, if you ask.

Regards,

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 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024

Thank you very much for your kind review and advice.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

Hmmm. I've read this three times and I'm not sure what the message is if there is one

It seems to me that she thinks she is a famous writer and she's having writers block and so she comes up with this idea to write something, but then she can't write it the words don't flow

You can tell me interpretation or not Sometimes I get things way wrong

I enjoyed reading your story

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024

Hi Pam, sorry if it was confusing to you. It's kind of like you, Pam, writing about yourself, and then yourself (also Pam) writes about herself (also Pam), who then writes about herself (again, Pam) and so on. Like multiple mirrors of the same story within one another. Thanks for your kind review.

reply by Pamusart on 11-Aug-2024

Oh ok. She wa
S stuck in a loop. That is what we called it and computer programming where the code just kept repeating itself over and over again because the command to stop it wasn't in there. Sometimes it was very difficult to find the problem.

Comment from lancellot

Exceptional

Well, I have to admit, this is a very unique entry. Of a type I haven't seen before. I tip my literary hat to your creative talent.

I think this one may be a winner. It is well written, edited and by being a one of a kind will stick to the readers/voters mind.

Good work.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024

Well, I guess it depends on how it sticks to the reader's mind. I just had a reviewer tell me they read it three times, but still didn't get it. Too confusingly loopsy to them, I guess. I had to try to explain it.
Thank you so very much for the read, encouraging, kind words and the excellent rating. I very much appreciate them! Have a good rest of your day!