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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from lyenochka
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I can just imagine all those stars reflected in the night ocean to look like a "sea full of stars". But it's sad that she has to wait beneath the rain which means whoever she's waiting for has not come.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
    Yes, that's true. Thank you, sis.

    Love ❤️

    Marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I don't know where you find your pictures and illustrations but they are absolutely gorgeous. This was such a dreamy type of poem. The sea of stars, so magical and such an aesthetically pleasing image. This was very beautiful. Gretchen

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
    I get my pictures from Pinterest, I have an account. You can use Pinterest too. It's free.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy smile 😊
Comment from Teri7
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful haiku you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely and beautiful imagery that go very well with your words. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Teri. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Teri7 on 13-Aug-2024
    I truly love your work, and I enjoy when I can join in on your events! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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So peaceful and so soothing. I am curious what she's waiting for. Probably her lover, or news about her lover. Or maybe just wanting peace from a stressful day. I enjoyed reading and you give your readers a sense of peace with this presentation.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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wish i were waiting neath the rain...
love rain! cool and refreshing- plus we need it again lol
love the imagery of being knee deep in a sea full of stars!
cool second pic - love seashells!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊