Pretty Woman
A very short romantic episode9 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A very clever piece, and that song by Roy Orbison was a clever inclusion. Your descriptions are excellent, and your use of the necessary words was smoothly executed and not jarring. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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A very clever piece, and that song by Roy Orbison was a clever inclusion. Your descriptions are excellent, and your use of the necessary words was smoothly executed and not jarring. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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My reply is not getting through. Thank you very much, Wendy.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Pretty Woman, has the proper word count and seems to be making the famous song by Roy Orbison come to realization. ...........
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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This one-hundred-word story, Pretty Woman, has the proper word count and seems to be making the famous song by Roy Orbison come to realization. ...........
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A fun and well expressed flash incorporating those flash words in a delightful scene of mutual attraction! Loved the way you enhanced your story imaginatively with Roy Orbison, very sexy:)) Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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A fun and well expressed flash incorporating those flash words in a delightful scene of mutual attraction! Loved the way you enhanced your story imaginatively with Roy Orbison, very sexy:)) Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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I am delighted you enjoyed my story, Debbie. It was fun to write. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and story to go with it.
-A good job with the required words,
and thanks for highlighting them.
-A very good opening hook, followed
by very good descriptive detail of his
observations about her, her dress, her face, and hair.
-I also like your closing section as she
makes a sudden departure, and he is
hearing a few lines of Roy Orbison's song.
-A very good conclusion that is open ended.
-When the contest is over, you should do a follow up.
-I enjoyed reading it, and it is very well written.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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-Nice artwork and story to go with it.
-A good job with the required words,
and thanks for highlighting them.
-A very good opening hook, followed
by very good descriptive detail of his
observations about her, her dress, her face, and hair.
-I also like your closing section as she
makes a sudden departure, and he is
hearing a few lines of Roy Orbison's song.
-A very good conclusion that is open ended.
-When the contest is over, you should do a follow up.
-I enjoyed reading it, and it is very well written.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your marvelous praise of PRETTY WOMAN and all those stars. I enjoyed writing this one because I love the song and the artwork.
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You are very welcome. I like the artwork and song, too, especially when it's sung by Roy Orbison.
Comment from Begin Again
Now Roy Orvison had some woman in mind when he wrote the song, so it might as well been this one. Fits perfectly and the story works for the contest. Good luck!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Now Roy Orvison had some woman in mind when he wrote the song, so it might as well been this one. Fits perfectly and the story works for the contest. Good luck!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Yes, I often wondered who the woman was that Roy Orbison wrote about. Julia Roberts showed up much later in the film. Many thanks, Carol, for your praise of my story.
Comment from lancellot
A nice flash story with a hopeful and happy ending. It was the perfect ending a romance flash, and I like the addition of the musical lyrics. Those who are fans will recognize them immediately.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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A nice flash story with a hopeful and happy ending. It was the perfect ending a romance flash, and I like the addition of the musical lyrics. Those who are fans will recognize them immediately.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, lancellot, for sharing and praising my story.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is a very imaginative take on the requirements of this contest. I especially like the song lyrics you included.
Good luck with it and the contest and happy writing!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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This is a very imaginative take on the requirements of this contest. I especially like the song lyrics you included.
Good luck with it and the contest and happy writing!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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My reply is not going through. Many thanks, Lindsey.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this short story. I like that you bolded the required words to make them easier to identify. I appreciate that you quoted Roy Orbison! Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed this short story. I like that you bolded the required words to make them easier to identify. I appreciate that you quoted Roy Orbison! Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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I am delighted you enjoyed this shortie, jessi. Many thanks for your kind words.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your piece has a charming and vivid quality that captures a romantic and somewhat whimsical moment beautifully. The way you describe the woman, with her red dress and auburn tresses, really brings her to life and creates a sense of enchantment. The integration of Roy Orbison's lyrics adds a nostalgic and personal touch that enhances the atmosphere of your encounter.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Your piece has a charming and vivid quality that captures a romantic and somewhat whimsical moment beautifully. The way you describe the woman, with her red dress and auburn tresses, really brings her to life and creates a sense of enchantment. The integration of Roy Orbison's lyrics adds a nostalgic and personal touch that enhances the atmosphere of your encounter.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Patty, thank you very much for your wonderful review of my shortie. I am so pleased you could easily see this pretty woman.