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Comment from RJ Heritage
Exceptional
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This is a beautifully written poem with great Bibicalic symbolism. It also reminds me of the great Maya Angelou who had the gift of writing and eloquent speech.
Well done.
RJ

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 11-Aug-2024
    My pleasure.
    RJ
reply by RJ Heritage on 11-Aug-2024
    My pleasure.
    RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
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love the dripping rainbow colours pic!
it's like the rainbow is going right through her...
a great haiku with excellent imagery and hopeful words
cool maya quote, too!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy 😊
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....is that Kamala Harris? If not, it should be. By contrast, if it was Trump, the picture would resemble a back and white still from a 1933 Universal horror movie

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Mike

    Gypsy 😊
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Mike

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
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God and Maya Angelou would certainly approve of your post, as will likely other FanStorians (-:

Your coloring scheme and selected artwork just enhance your overall presentation -- nicely done!

Mark

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Mark

    Gypsy 😊
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Mark

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
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This haiku, Color Me a Rainbow, has the proper formatting and brings the visual and the spiritual together for an impression of serenity to begin the day after.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Bill

    Gypsy 😊
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Bill

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Pamusart
Exceptional
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Hi,Gypsy

This is beautiful. You painted a detailed fantasy in just seventies syllables.

Why the heck didn't you enter this in the haiku contest? I think this entry might've won it. There's a cash price.

This is so original that I'm giving you six stars for it and you deserve it

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Pam, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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I like "divine finger paint". God gave the rainbow as a sign He wouldn't drown out the world ever again. And one song about this covenant says, "He signed it with the rainbow."

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Yes, I knew about the Bible's rainbow verse in Genesis from my catechism classes. The Flood intrigued me when I was little. I didn't understand why wanted to kill everyone on earth, except Noah and his family.

    Thank you very much for your kind review.

    Love

    Marival ❤️