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Autumn leaves

Natures carpet

2 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This monorhyme 5-7-5, Autumn Leaves, has the proper formatting and catches the up to down action as the multicolored leaves bit their goodbyes and follow gravity to the surface.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Lindsey Russell
Excellent
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I love the colors of fall. I used to love jumping into piles of soft leaves when I was little. It was such a soft place to land. You captured that feeling beautifully here. Happy writing!

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
    Thanks Lindsey