Autumn Transforms
the autumnal ballet4 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I can see you are enjoying a new program, But to be honest with you, sweetie, The extra picture is distracting and the colored writing is irritating. The matte color has nothing to do woth the colors in the pictures. My opinion only. Karen
  |
I can see you are enjoying a new program, But to be honest with you, sweetie, The extra picture is distracting and the colored writing is irritating. The matte color has nothing to do woth the colors in the pictures. My opinion only. Karen
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from SimianSavant
This is a neat creative approach that could really use some tweaking to reach its full potential.
Pink as a background? Yuck. Try some shades of darker green, or something brown or orange. Just make sure that your font stands out as much as possible from whatever hue you choose. You can always add some white shadowing to make it pop more if needed (this works better with some fonts than others).
Crop the black lower border off the top picture. Cite the image source in your author notes instead.
The vertical line spacing on your text is very tight, causing letter collisions with your lowercase Gs and the line below it. I do not use the "advanced" editor, but there should be a way you can change that spacing in there.
Hope this is helpful to ya. Thanks for the read!
🦍
|
This is a neat creative approach that could really use some tweaking to reach its full potential.
Pink as a background? Yuck. Try some shades of darker green, or something brown or orange. Just make sure that your font stands out as much as possible from whatever hue you choose. You can always add some white shadowing to make it pop more if needed (this works better with some fonts than others).
Crop the black lower border off the top picture. Cite the image source in your author notes instead.
The vertical line spacing on your text is very tight, causing letter collisions with your lowercase Gs and the line below it. I do not use the "advanced" editor, but there should be a way you can change that spacing in there.
Hope this is helpful to ya. Thanks for the read!
🦍
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Ode to Autumn writing prompt. Accurately descriptive. I especially love the last line. The autumn death dive is a perfect description for the falling of the dead leaves. Thanks for sharing.
|
An excellent entry for the Ode to Autumn writing prompt. Accurately descriptive. I especially love the last line. The autumn death dive is a perfect description for the falling of the dead leaves. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This autumn 5-7-5, Autumn Transforms, has the proper formatting and sees the dying leaves change from live leafy green to the pale shell that falls to the ground.
|
This autumn 5-7-5, Autumn Transforms, has the proper formatting and sees the dying leaves change from live leafy green to the pale shell that falls to the ground.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024