Broken Promises
Shortlived romance9 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
What a solid one-line poem, about a wishy-washy woman! I like that there's kind of alliteration in it. And that it's eight syllables with 4 being about one condition and the other 4 being about the flip-flop.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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What a solid one-line poem, about a wishy-washy woman! I like that there's kind of alliteration in it. And that it's eight syllables with 4 being about one condition and the other 4 being about the flip-flop.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Aiona, for your kind review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Ginda,
This seems to imply she didn't stay faithful to her marriage promises.
That is sad.
Congrats on placing third in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Hi Ginda,
This seems to imply she didn't stay faithful to her marriage promises.
That is sad.
Congrats on placing third in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful weekend
Joan
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Joan, for your review and for your congrats.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, today many people say I do, but when it comes down to the everyday life they don't. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, today many people say I do, but when it comes down to the everyday life they don't. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thanks for commenting.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, that's a powerful one-line poem for the contest! Also, a nice picture and presentation for your seven words. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Wow, that's a powerful one-line poem for the contest! Also, a nice picture and presentation for your seven words. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Carol, for these shiny stars.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Mintybee
This is one of the best monostiches I've seen. It contains a full story that starts out happily and ends tragically. Even without the picture for clarification, I think this would speak for itself. Well done.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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This is one of the best monostiches I've seen. It contains a full story that starts out happily and ends tragically. Even without the picture for clarification, I think this would speak for itself. Well done.
Mintybee
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Your comments are always appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
That is always so sad. It's hard for people to commit to lifelong partnership as many have some unrealistic views of a fairytale life without the effort to work through difficulties together. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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That is always so sad. It's hard for people to commit to lifelong partnership as many have some unrealistic views of a fairytale life without the effort to work through difficulties together. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Your comments are always appreciated. Thanks, Helen.
Comment from Samantha Wymer
That is very beautiful and perfect for the one line poem contest. Best of luck with that. Great writing. The picture matches perfectly with your remarkable poem.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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That is very beautiful and perfect for the one line poem contest. Best of luck with that. Great writing. The picture matches perfectly with your remarkable poem.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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I always appreciate how kind and encouraging your remarks are.
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Anytime 😊
Comment from jessizero
This was an excellent monostich poem. You managed to tell a story in just one line of poetry. I also liked the picture you included. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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This was an excellent monostich poem. You managed to tell a story in just one line of poetry. I also liked the picture you included. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Jessi. I appreciate your kind feedback.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Broken Promises, uses seven words to depict the sad truth about wedding vows which sometimes hold true, but seventy-five percent of the time do not.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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This one-line poem, Broken Promises, uses seven words to depict the sad truth about wedding vows which sometimes hold true, but seventy-five percent of the time do not.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thanks for commenting.