2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from lyenochka
Ah, I know. It's nice when neighbors are friendly and compatible. I try to be a good neighbor but not all are easy to get along with. My neighbor from 20 years ago told me her neighborhood was like that picture in Lebanon where neighbors always talked to each other from the balconies.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Ah, I know. It's nice when neighbors are friendly and compatible. I try to be a good neighbor but not all are easy to get along with. My neighbor from 20 years ago told me her neighborhood was like that picture in Lebanon where neighbors always talked to each other from the balconies.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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LoL in Spain elder women do that too. I'm nice to my neighbors. My closest neighbor is a Trump supporter but we don't talk about politics. She is a little crazy but nice. She spends a lot of time walking around our townhouses building to guard and gossip. She is very good at telling us when we have packages at the door. She taps on the door super soft but now we know it's her. LoL
Thank you, big sister.
Love ❤️
Marival
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We use text to notify our neighbors about things like that. No shouting out the door needed. Lol.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, we have neighbors that could use some of them there sour grapes for sending, but then we also have some great neighbors so they make up for the bad ones
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, we have neighbors that could use some of them there sour grapes for sending, but then we also have some great neighbors so they make up for the bad ones
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
I di not quite understand what you're trying to say in this one. It seems that one neighbor is envious of the other neighbor and so like in the tale of the fox and the grapes, calls them sour because he could not reach them. Your illustration speaks to this, and I found some understanding eith thus perspective.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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I di not quite understand what you're trying to say in this one. It seems that one neighbor is envious of the other neighbor and so like in the tale of the fox and the grapes, calls them sour because he could not reach them. Your illustration speaks to this, and I found some understanding eith thus perspective.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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It's American humor. The neighbors are annoying so the woman gives her neighbors sour grapes.
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome. I get it.
RJ
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Sometimes neighbors can be like sour grapes, but my experience is most of my neighbors have been excellent. Having lived most of my adult life as a military spouse, it was always comforting to know that no matter who your neighbors were, either they or you would be moving soon. LOL Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Sometimes neighbors can be like sour grapes, but my experience is most of my neighbors have been excellent. Having lived most of my adult life as a military spouse, it was always comforting to know that no matter who your neighbors were, either they or you would be moving soon. LOL Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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LoL Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
Okay, maybe it's my dark sense of humor, but I laughed at this one. Such a fun look at the cliché about sour grapes and now you resent it to them. Very humorous. I do so enjoy your poetry. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Okay, maybe it's my dark sense of humor, but I laughed at this one. Such a fun look at the cliché about sour grapes and now you resent it to them. Very humorous. I do so enjoy your poetry. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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hehe ... yes it's supposed to be humorous (*=*)
Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, A Gift for Our Neighbors, has the proper formatting and sounds like the fine folks next door are about to have something to "whine" about.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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This senryu, A Gift for Our Neighbors, has the proper formatting and sounds like the fine folks next door are about to have something to "whine" about.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
Heh! Heh! Sour grapes are quite tasty when served correctly. This is an excellent piece, Gypsy. But, if you don't like them, well, you get what you sow.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Heh! Heh! Sour grapes are quite tasty when served correctly. This is an excellent piece, Gypsy. But, if you don't like them, well, you get what you sow.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
lol!! cute little senryu!
fun yet thought-provoking
nice imagery with the green, blue, and pink colours
smooth flow through all three lines...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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lol!! cute little senryu!
fun yet thought-provoking
nice imagery with the green, blue, and pink colours
smooth flow through all three lines...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Samantha Wymer
That is exactly how I feel about my one of my neighbors lol. Your poem is humorous and well spoken. I think you did an excellent job rhyming your poem.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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That is exactly how I feel about my one of my neighbors lol. Your poem is humorous and well spoken. I think you did an excellent job rhyming your poem.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Samantha. Happy weekend!
Gypsy 😊
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Same to you