Laid Bare
A Short Senryu3 total reviews
Comment from bonespur
It's really hard when you have to critique your own life. It makes you address things that you May not be ready to co front. Everyone has a skeleton or two. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
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It's really hard when you have to critique your own life. It makes you address things that you May not be ready to co front. Everyone has a skeleton or two. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Laid Bare, has the proper formatting and seems to criticize the main character of the "novel" as being one who has not stepped up to the role with the full potential expected.
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This 5-7-5, Laid Bare, has the proper formatting and seems to criticize the main character of the "novel" as being one who has not stepped up to the role with the full potential expected.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
Without the sweating, this could be said about sections of each of our lives. Sometimes life is a bad author and we want to slam its book
shut or edit it to our liking.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend.
Joan
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Hi
Without the sweating, this could be said about sections of each of our lives. Sometimes life is a bad author and we want to slam its book
shut or edit it to our liking.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
