2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's sad that only the north wind knocks on her door, but unfortunately that situation happens far too often. Your presentation is beautiful as is your poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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It's sad that only the north wind knocks on her door, but unfortunately that situation happens far too often. Your presentation is beautiful as is your poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from dovemarie
Hi Gypsy, Short, good haiku about a winter night and how only the north wind knocks on a widow's door. That makes me feel as though she has no welcoming friend to knock on her door,to keep her company, only the wind that is from nature that she can hear and feel. Dove
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Hi Gypsy, Short, good haiku about a winter night and how only the north wind knocks on a widow's door. That makes me feel as though she has no welcoming friend to knock on her door,to keep her company, only the wind that is from nature that she can hear and feel. Dove
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
Your embodies the loneliness of some older people. Alone and forgotten. It's sad. The winter time setting with it's cold short days was like the December time in the seasons of life. Wonderfully written. Gretchen
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Your embodies the loneliness of some older people. Alone and forgotten. It's sad. The winter time setting with it's cold short days was like the December time in the seasons of life. Wonderfully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
Oh, this is a deliciously chilling piece you have delivered, Gypsy. Not because it's cold, either. There is darkness in them there woods. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Oh, this is a deliciously chilling piece you have delivered, Gypsy. Not because it's cold, either. There is darkness in them there woods. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
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You as well, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
Sad story told in so few words! I like your personification of the wind and how it knocks. Often those who are sick or needy or lonely are the ones who don't get the visits they need. Well said!
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Sad story told in so few words! I like your personification of the wind and how it knocks. Often those who are sick or needy or lonely are the ones who don't get the visits they need. Well said!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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I lived alone for ten years after my divorce. It can get very lonely, especially when I had depression episodes
Thank you very much, big sister. Have a wonderful weekend.
Love ❤️
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
Your words bring to mind the loneliness one experiences when the ones dear to you have forgotten to call on you. Those who do look you up are cold and distant. Your presentation isxwell done as usual.
Thanks for,sharing.
RJ
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Your words bring to mind the loneliness one experiences when the ones dear to you have forgotten to call on you. Those who do look you up are cold and distant. Your presentation isxwell done as usual.
Thanks for,sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
Comment from shelley kaye
love that top pic! looks like the moon is resting on a cloud bed...
a sad haiku with excellent imagery
i like the alliteration of the w and n sounds
smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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love that top pic! looks like the moon is resting on a cloud bed...
a sad haiku with excellent imagery
i like the alliteration of the w and n sounds
smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
Back to your horror genre Gypsy! I like the verse and accompanying artwork.
The cold North wind is often ominous in literature and likely in Native American lore.
You captured that feeling with your post - nicely done.
Mark
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Back to your horror genre Gypsy! I like the verse and accompanying artwork.
The cold North wind is often ominous in literature and likely in Native American lore.
You captured that feeling with your post - nicely done.
Mark
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Cold, creepy and generally uninviting. As you say, only the cold wind goes there. Some good alliteration enhancing cohesion and flow in your excellent free verse. Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
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Cold, creepy and generally uninviting. As you say, only the cold wind goes there. Some good alliteration enhancing cohesion and flow in your excellent free verse. Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
I guess the north wind would your cold wind, whereas the north wind is what brings our warmth, this a terrific poem Gypsy, this is a great post, well done, with blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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I guess the north wind would your cold wind, whereas the north wind is what brings our warmth, this a terrific poem Gypsy, this is a great post, well done, with blessings Roy
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Yes, north wind for us is cold. Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy 😊
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Bless you