Comment from bonespur

Excellent

The whole political bullshit just eats at me. Instead of fighting each other because of which ever party you belong to I wish we could all just go back in time and realize what we were fighting the revolutionary war for..we were all on the same page after the same outcome. What happened? Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Author,
Your cogent poem spells out your beliefs and political hopes. I'm a dem. but you've written a good argument for your side.
One note: her vote pick is spelled Walz.
Best wishes, though voting blue,
Cindy

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Madeleine Mardis

Excellent

I so agree with you about Trump! Great post! Optimism is so refreshing to hear, I am behind Harris and Walz 100% just hope that vote certification problem gets figured out in time, Trump is pretty certain he can cheat his way into power! Maddy

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024

unfortunately Trump is still polling at 48 percent but behind Harris

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Interesting take on the challenge using the two presidential teams' names as your first and last lines. I sure hope you are right because some people are addicted to fear and hate and Trump's campaign has always been about fear-mongering. During his time in office, Asian Americans were attacked because of his racist rhetoric.
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024

Thanks a lot

reply by lyenochka on 09-Aug-2024

Oh, by the way, you misspelled Walz.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

I agree, I believe Trump has a private agenda, if elected he will destroy our country. The democratic ticket is the way to go, let the truth be told. If you listen to him, he confuses names, tells the press and his followers one thing then denies ever saying it, even if they have the proof on tape.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This senryu, Harris Trump Political Senryu, has the proper formatting and states the difference between the MAGA mindset and the Democratic ticket. Optimism -- for all we are and will be next.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024

thanks I am so much more optimistic these days. Waltz was a great VP choice

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem packs a punch with its bold statements and timely references. It's concise yet impactful, making me pause and consider the candidates! Nicely done!

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024

thanks a lot