Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, this poem is so sweet. I love the photo of the turtle. This is a happy poem that made me smile. Great presentation. A pleasure to read. Xo. M

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy 😊

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

maybe the hare will take a nap LOL!
totally cute picture and haiku!
nice and fun imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 08-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley

Gypsy 😊

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am positive that adorable little turtle will complete the journey. He will not give up. This is a fun poem to read. I enjoyed and continued smiling. Thank you for making my day.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024

Thank you very much, Barbara

Gypsy 😊

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Well, we know that the turtle is not the fastest of God's creatures, but he is quite steady and often has his mind focused on getting where he set out to go. Plus thus guy is so cute...Awwwwwh.
RJ

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024

Thank you very much, RJ

Gypsy 😊

reply by RJ Heritage on 08-Aug-2024

You're welcome
YOU'RE welcome,
RJ

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

So cute!! I feel as if this could be a poem from a patent to a child. Lovingly calling the child turtle. Knowing they can slow you down, but letting them know you are going to stick with them. Beautiful and so sweet. Gretchen

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024

Thank you very much, Gretchen

Gypsy 😊

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

You have found incredible artwork to support this beautiful little piece. This pair seems to be on a slow roll. Thank you for sharing, my friend.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024

Thank you very much, Steve

Gypsy 😊

reply by Neonewman on 08-Aug-2024

Always, my friend.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. But that's such a cute, little guy. We can slow down for him so that he can keep up. Maybe we should take a shortcut or put him on a wagon instead.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024

You are loving and kind with all sentient beings... I took the word 'fast ' out. I will carry her if she is tired.

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love ❤️

Marival 😊

reply by lyenochka on 07-Aug-2024

So cute!
Yvonne has had turtles and they communicate with her. They eat with her cats!

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024

I had a few turtles when I was young. 😊

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Little Turtle, has the proper formatting and calls on the littlest and possibly slowest animal, which has feet, to come along on a trip to who knows where.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024

Thank you very much, Bill

Gypsy 😊