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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A very romantic poem. Don't we all wish to see ourselves through the eyes of someone who loves us? Your entire presentation is lovely as always. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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A very romantic poem. Don't we all wish to see ourselves through the eyes of someone who loves us? Your entire presentation is lovely as always. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
Wow, this is really unique, amazing and beautiful! I wish I had another six, this really deserves one! Ambrosia, heavenly! And the reflection on someone's eyes! It's spinning a wonderful magic spell, takes you on a magic carpet ride of love! Maddy
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Wow, this is really unique, amazing and beautiful! I wish I had another six, this really deserves one! Ambrosia, heavenly! And the reflection on someone's eyes! It's spinning a wonderful magic spell, takes you on a magic carpet ride of love! Maddy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Madeleine. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much, Madeleine. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from jake cosmos aller
love this poem about life. I like the image chosen. Reminds me of a Tango dancer and the K-Drama I recently saw that featured a tango dancer called Eve
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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love this poem about life. I like the image chosen. Reminds me of a Tango dancer and the K-Drama I recently saw that featured a tango dancer called Eve
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Jake. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much, Jake. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I love that term: seeing myself through your eyes. I say that to my students a lot when they become discouraged. "Oh, I wish you would see you like I see you!" I say to them. It's a very important context, and a slant to which not everyone really gives a lot of thought.
Very beautifully presented, and hypnotically romantic with its syntax. Yet another masterpiece by the consummate poet master. xoxo
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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I love that term: seeing myself through your eyes. I say that to my students a lot when they become discouraged. "Oh, I wish you would see you like I see you!" I say to them. It's a very important context, and a slant to which not everyone really gives a lot of thought.
Very beautifully presented, and hypnotically romantic with its syntax. Yet another masterpiece by the consummate poet master. xoxo
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle. When my children were young and were feeling bad about themselves I would tell them, I wish you could see yourself through my eyes, also when my exhusband and I first met and he told me how beautiful and special I was...
Gypsy 😊
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No wonder we get along so well, Gypsy; we are like two peas in a pod. xoxo
Comment from shelley kaye
i liked how you started and ended with the reflections in the eyes
the poem come full circle and the flow was smooth with nice imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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i liked how you started and ended with the reflections in the eyes
the poem come full circle and the flow was smooth with nice imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God sees us from the inside out. He knows our hearts. Wouldn't be wonderful we could see others and they could see us that way. I bet there would be less hate in the world. Thank you for sharing your talent withs us.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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God sees us from the inside out. He knows our hearts. Wouldn't be wonderful we could see others and they could see us that way. I bet there would be less hate in the world. Thank you for sharing your talent withs us.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a soul bearing poem. To let someone know that you love them enough to bear your soul to them is letting your most vulnerable self stand in the open. It shows live, trust and devotion. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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This was such a soul bearing poem. To let someone know that you love them enough to bear your soul to them is letting your most vulnerable self stand in the open. It shows live, trust and devotion. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
I think this is a relatable piece for most of us. I've wondered how others portray me through their eyes, but never for a love. I enjoyed this well-crafted piece, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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I think this is a relatable piece for most of us. I've wondered how others portray me through their eyes, but never for a love. I enjoyed this well-crafted piece, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is simply enchanting! Everything from your poem to the way you present it. I especially love the way you express the desire to be seen and embraced through the lens of another's eyes. It's a heartfelt way of sharing love.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Your poem is simply enchanting! Everything from your poem to the way you present it. I especially love the way you express the desire to be seen and embraced through the lens of another's eyes. It's a heartfelt way of sharing love.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Michael
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Through Your Eyes, moves from the real to the surreal as the need to see through another's eyes becomes the metaphysical desire of one lover for another.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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This free verse, Through Your Eyes, moves from the real to the surreal as the need to see through another's eyes becomes the metaphysical desire of one lover for another.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy 😊
