Reviews from

Frights Throughout the Night

Things are scarier at night

3 total reviews 
Comment from TPAC
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Very well expressed, sensing a poetic format, finding within selected views captivating to my interest. A super read, in my given opinion, filled with.many horrifying thoughts for its reader. All stated in my given opinion.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Thank you for your kind comments and for reviewing. Also, thank you for the beautiful rating.
Comment from Neonewman
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This well-crafted piece offered a wonderful flow throughout. This is a great entry for this particular writing prompt. Best of luck and thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Thank you for your kind comments and for reviewing.
reply by Neonewman on 07-Dec-2024
    My pleasure.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Suggestion - make the background to the text a little lighter. This is not easy to read as it is.

There's a slight clash between the bouncy meter and strong rhyme which gives this a jaunty feel and the horror-based contest. However, who's to say you can't write a light-sounding poem on a dark topic?

Good luck in the contest.

Steve


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Thank you for your kind comments and for reviewing.