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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this adorable poem and presentation with us. We have numerous morning glory vines and flowers all over our yard. The best part, besides how pretty they are is they do attract hummingbirds. Your presentation caused me to smile.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara. Hummingbirds are so cute.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Morning Glories, has the proper formatting and notes that the flowers are suffering from bed head as they are also receiving probing visitors on the wing.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Bill.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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love the deeper inner meaning of the tousled bed
cool hummingbird haiku with great imagery rising

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 06-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Well, to me they look very tidy, I guess as the morning continues they will rise. Your picture is beautiful. I love hummingbird. Thanks for sharing this wonderful picture. God blessings to you and your family.
RJ

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 06-Aug-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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That's a very good description of their petals; they ARE 'touseled!' Love the different pastel-colored fonts, too. Beautiful overall effect!! Professional as always!! Xoxo

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Rachelle

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
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This is another stellar performance, Gypsy. Reading these makes me want to dust off some of my old Haiku's. Thank you for sharing, my friend.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Steve

    Gypsy 😊
reply by Neonewman on 06-Aug-2024
    My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
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I like your personification of the flowers has having "tousled petals" as if they had quite the night. Or they might be heavy sleepers. But they are quite the happy "glories" of the morning.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Big Sister

    Love ❤️

    MariVal 😊