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College Stories(Memories of Finn)Q2

Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "It's Too Small!!!"
A collection of Delights/Moments/Stories

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Comment from Mintybee
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I like how you build up expectation in this piece. It seems too good to be true - even the sun shines on golden scissors for this shirt! And then it is too good to be true. I'm sorry your shirt didn't fit. I'm glad you could write such a fun story about it.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Haha...yup. Indeed.
Comment from jenintorre
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Ha ha. A very humorously told tale. Ah well you can always take it back. Incidentally I love T.K. Max. Great bargains.
Thanks for the entertainment. Jen.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
    I agree! Delightful place to shop. It's either TJ Maxx or Marshalls for me.
    Much appreciation and gratitude. Thanks for the review!