The Coyote Boys
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Wild Dogs"Story about two brothers who change their destiny.
18 total reviews
Comment from Jim Wile
Oh, no, Gretchen. I wanted to keep going. When a story is good, you don't want to stop reading. This one has captured my interest like few others I've read here.
The boys have certainly been provoked. I just hope they go about it in a way that doesn't bring the law down on them. But then again, that could be an interesting twist to the story too. Whatever happens, I know it will be done well in your hands.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Oh, no, Gretchen. I wanted to keep going. When a story is good, you don't want to stop reading. This one has captured my interest like few others I've read here.
The boys have certainly been provoked. I just hope they go about it in a way that doesn't bring the law down on them. But then again, that could be an interesting twist to the story too. Whatever happens, I know it will be done well in your hands.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you. This story has surprised me with the reception it's gotten on here. I figured I'd be losing followers. Lol. I'm really glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
Somehow, I missed this on earlier and read the other one first. This goes more into how he claimed he got his injuries. No one believes him but his wife goes along with what he says because she feel obligated to.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Somehow, I missed this on earlier and read the other one first. This goes more into how he claimed he got his injuries. No one believes him but his wife goes along with what he says because she feel obligated to.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Beth. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
I have a real hatred for plain abuse, there really isn't room for people like that, but I don't completely believe that folk are all bad, there must be some humanity somewhere in them, Judas knew what he'd done, even for him there was hope, but he didn't think there was. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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I have a real hatred for plain abuse, there really isn't room for people like that, but I don't completely believe that folk are all bad, there must be some humanity somewhere in them, Judas knew what he'd done, even for him there was hope, but he didn't think there was. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad we can all agree that Matthew is trash. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Dewey is tired of all the abuse and ready to strike back. I don't blame him. I bet a woman scratched Mathew. I hope he gets hurt and stops being such an asshole.
Well done, Gretchen. I love this story.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Dewey is tired of all the abuse and ready to strike back. I don't blame him. I bet a woman scratched Mathew. I hope he gets hurt and stops being such an asshole.
Well done, Gretchen. I love this story.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Doubt Matthew will change. Ever. Thank you so much for this awesome and encouraging review. Thank you for the extra star as well. Gretchen
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This may be long compared to your usual posts, but in terms of content it's perfect. I enjoyed it very much, and love the violence that you described so efficiently. kay
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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This may be long compared to your usual posts, but in terms of content it's perfect. I enjoyed it very much, and love the violence that you described so efficiently. kay
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thank you. I try not to be graphic if possible. I appreciate the awesome review and the sixth star. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess it's a personality for me that I can hardly wait to see the old man get what he has coming to him, and for his sons to be the ones to give it to him. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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I guess it's a personality for me that I can hardly wait to see the old man get what he has coming to him, and for his sons to be the ones to give it to him. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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I can't wait for someone to knock his block off. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
There really isn't a stopping point in this post. It needs to be one post. Thank you for sharing it with us. I really like this story.
She looks tired. Dark circles seem to swallow her eyes and she looks tired. (I would omit the first, "She looks tired. & comma after
eyes.))
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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There really isn't a stopping point in this post. It needs to be one post. Thank you for sharing it with us. I really like this story.
She looks tired. Dark circles seem to swallow her eyes and she looks tired. (I would omit the first, "She looks tired. & comma after
eyes.))
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thank you. Guess I just wanted you to know she looked tired . Lol. Thanks for pointing that out. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh my word! It's really coming to a head now, Dewey is out to kill him, and I don't blame him! I'd help him if I was in your story!!! LOL. It only took one man (or woman with those scratches) to beat him up, and now the two lads know he isn't invincible. Now they are getting prepared, and I suspect their father is beginning to realise he's going to have to watch his back. Can't wait, but if you are making the next one the last one, wait until Sunday! Otherwise, tomorrow would be fine! LOL. Well done, my friend, wonderful chapter. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Oh my word! It's really coming to a head now, Dewey is out to kill him, and I don't blame him! I'd help him if I was in your story!!! LOL. It only took one man (or woman with those scratches) to beat him up, and now the two lads know he isn't invincible. Now they are getting prepared, and I suspect their father is beginning to realise he's going to have to watch his back. Can't wait, but if you are making the next one the last one, wait until Sunday! Otherwise, tomorrow would be fine! LOL. Well done, my friend, wonderful chapter. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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I'm trying to post tomorrow. Who knows if it's going to happen. Lol. Thank you for this wonderful review and rating. Much appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I hate to think of those poor boys with beating their father to death on their conscience. She shouldn't let him hurt those boys.He broke her sons head and make him simple and lets him treat the child he broke as having a problem that is his own fault. I am upset.
Some things get to me more than others. Good writing. Karen
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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I hate to think of those poor boys with beating their father to death on their conscience. She shouldn't let him hurt those boys.He broke her sons head and make him simple and lets him treat the child he broke as having a problem that is his own fault. I am upset.
Some things get to me more than others. Good writing. Karen
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Karen. I appreciate the feedback. Gretchen
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You are a good writer,friend. Karen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I wonder who did this to the Father then Gretchen? Or is this a big secret? Now he is on the back foot then Dewey wants to strike whilst the iron in that spade is hot! Another fine chapter, and a revenge plot is in place, and it is just a matter of time before Matthew bites the dust for good! Ha ha ha, much enjoyed Gretchen, love the language and the atmospheric you create in your stories, a fly on the wall account, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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I wonder who did this to the Father then Gretchen? Or is this a big secret? Now he is on the back foot then Dewey wants to strike whilst the iron in that spade is hot! Another fine chapter, and a revenge plot is in place, and it is just a matter of time before Matthew bites the dust for good! Ha ha ha, much enjoyed Gretchen, love the language and the atmospheric you create in your stories, a fly on the wall account, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. We will find out shortly who fought back. Thank you so much for the enthusiastic review. Gretchen