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College Stories(Memories of Finn)Q2

Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "What is Love?"
A collection of Delights/Moments/Stories

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Comment from Mintybee
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I enjoyed reading this story. It captures one small moment of curiosity, and you've added in the words that others left behind that they felt captured their feelings at the moment. You use strong nouns and words as well as rich detail to keep the reader's interest.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Gratitude. Ever so glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your reflections on the vandalized wall and the messages it held are so interesting. Reading this it makes me think about how something often dismissed as mere vandalism can instead reveal deep, personal questions. I though tthis was well written. Great job! I look forward to reading more from you.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Mm! I'm glad. Gratitude.