2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from lyenochka
That's a whole series of the end of things - end of the grape harvest, end of the warmer weather, and worst of all the end of a relationship with the one who used to share the bed.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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That's a whole series of the end of things - end of the grape harvest, end of the warmer weather, and worst of all the end of a relationship with the one who used to share the bed.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival ❤️ 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I had to pause and ponder; how can one hear snow falling? Only if there's a blizzard and then one hears the wind. I guess that's not important because it all fits together in a wonderful and beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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I had to pause and ponder; how can one hear snow falling? Only if there's a blizzard and then one hears the wind. I guess that's not important because it all fits together in a wonderful and beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Neonewman
This is utter perfection, Gypsy. At first, I thought all those grapes were skulls over the land. The withered grapes on the vine in the art below is heart-like in appearance.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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This is utter perfection, Gypsy. At first, I thought all those grapes were skulls over the land. The withered grapes on the vine in the art below is heart-like in appearance.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
As I read thus poem, it brought to me a feeling of loneliness and sadness, as seen in the use of withered grapee vines.
Your imagery was strong and the poem well written.
Thank you for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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As I read thus poem, it brought to me a feeling of loneliness and sadness, as seen in the use of withered grapee vines.
Your imagery was strong and the poem well written.
Thank you for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ 😊
Gypsy
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a really great tanka you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Gypsy, This is a really great tanka you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
not a wine drinker so being all out doesn't bother me a bit lol
cool tanka (pun intended) and i liked the vine/wine rhyme
nicely done with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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not a wine drinker so being all out doesn't bother me a bit lol
cool tanka (pun intended) and i liked the vine/wine rhyme
nicely done with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....fitting poem because except for the wine and the snow outside this poem could have been about me last night, my leg ached something fierce!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....fitting poem because except for the wine and the snow outside this poem could have been about me last night, my leg ached something fierce!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This has a theme of coldness running right through the verse. The snow has killed the vines, leaving no wine or any prospect of love to warm the soul. Your choice of colour amplifies the sensation of dark loss and separation. Thanks for sharing this evocative post. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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This has a theme of coldness running right through the verse. The snow has killed the vines, leaving no wine or any prospect of love to warm the soul. Your choice of colour amplifies the sensation of dark loss and separation. Thanks for sharing this evocative post. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from jessizero
I love the presentation of this poem. It was very artistic. The poem itself was chilly, yet beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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I love the presentation of this poem. It was very artistic. The poem itself was chilly, yet beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Jessi
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
Your poem made me think about the cold nights last winter. Now, it's the opposite. Shorts and a t-shirt with just the sheet pulled up. I used to feel bad for trees losing their leaves. How vulnerable they were to the cold winter winds. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Your poem made me think about the cold nights last winter. Now, it's the opposite. Shorts and a t-shirt with just the sheet pulled up. I used to feel bad for trees losing their leaves. How vulnerable they were to the cold winter winds. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊