2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "Long After".
10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This Halloween poem, Long After, certainly does pull the readers into this house, in the throes of dilapidation, to find the long-forgotten prisoner, trapped and probably near death, still suffering with the pains of being alive in a place of the dead.
Thumbs up to you and salute to Dean.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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This Halloween poem, Long After, certainly does pull the readers into this house, in the throes of dilapidation, to find the long-forgotten prisoner, trapped and probably near death, still suffering with the pains of being alive in a place of the dead.
Thumbs up to you and salute to Dean.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy
Comment from Douglas Goff
This was so deliciously spooky that I had to six star it.
I mean 'behind the wall'. That is spooktacular.
Great job here. I have always liked your 'fright' pieces.
D
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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This was so deliciously spooky that I had to six star it.
I mean 'behind the wall'. That is spooktacular.
Great job here. I have always liked your 'fright' pieces.
D
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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A great piece, MariVal
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine and spooky poem, Gypsy----Dean wound have found this excellent. P.S. let's not rush the season, huh? Are you trying to bum me out? Time is going by too fast as it is!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Another fine and spooky poem, Gypsy----Dean wound have found this excellent. P.S. let's not rush the season, huh? Are you trying to bum me out? Time is going by too fast as it is!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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LoL sorry. I was going through the cash contest and found this one.
Thank you very much, mike
Gypsy 😊
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I guess I'll forgive you!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The poets are all getting ready for Halloween and even the contests have started. You have definitely honored Dean's memory with this contest entry. The presentation and the poem are perfect. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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The poets are all getting ready for Halloween and even the contests have started. You have definitely honored Dean's memory with this contest entry. The presentation and the poem are perfect. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
and dean would love this one!
great onomatopoeia word choices
with dark and creepy imagery
and a smooth flow throughout the shadows...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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and dean would love this one!
great onomatopoeia word choices
with dark and creepy imagery
and a smooth flow throughout the shadows...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Yes, I've heard of Dean but I think he was before my time. Wow, Gypsy, his influence must have been impressive. The images are superb as your hauntingly evolving verse skilfully reaches its horror-filled conclusion. I'm not quite ready for Halloween yet but this is going to freak out the competition, that's for sure! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Yes, I've heard of Dean but I think he was before my time. Wow, Gypsy, his influence must have been impressive. The images are superb as your hauntingly evolving verse skilfully reaches its horror-filled conclusion. I'm not quite ready for Halloween yet but this is going to freak out the competition, that's for sure! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Dean was an exceptional poet and artist. His presentations were impressive. We met in person. We had a lot in common.
Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very well depicted horror poem, giving great imagery through its words and picture. The black and white motif intensifies the horror. Well done, it brings the chill behind the true horror of Halloween. I never cared for this celebration myself, but I know that it is well received by many.
RJ
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Very well depicted horror poem, giving great imagery through its words and picture. The black and white motif intensifies the horror. Well done, it brings the chill behind the true horror of Halloween. I never cared for this celebration myself, but I know that it is well received by many.
RJ
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Neonewman
Dean is the king of horror. I enjoyed the hell out of his work and appreciated the time he took to help me along. The piece above that you so eloquently offered is right up my alley and his too. Great Job, Gypsy. By the way, I'm not too fond of spiders.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Dean is the king of horror. I enjoyed the hell out of his work and appreciated the time he took to help me along. The piece above that you so eloquently offered is right up my alley and his too. Great Job, Gypsy. By the way, I'm not too fond of spiders.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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There are a couple of horror movies out about spiders. They are very creepy and I love it. lol
Thank you very much, Steve 😊
Gypsy
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Nope! That's one thing I can't do.
Comment from royowen
It's funny the minute I read this I immediately thought of Dean, this is the same as he would write in his inimitable way, but then again you've made Dean's memory live on. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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It's funny the minute I read this I immediately thought of Dean, this is the same as he would write in his inimitable way, but then again you've made Dean's memory live on. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy 😊
Gypsy
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welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
Ah, Dean Kuch. I do miss his wonderful writing. He was a master of horror. I love your poetic tribute to the master of horror. The pictures you picked gave me the creeps and I loved it. Thank you for sharing your awesome talent. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Ah, Dean Kuch. I do miss his wonderful writing. He was a master of horror. I love your poetic tribute to the master of horror. The pictures you picked gave me the creeps and I loved it. Thank you for sharing your awesome talent. Gretchen
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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We got very close and met in person but he died in 2016, as you know.
Thank you very much, Gretchen 😊
Gypsy