Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I sure wanted to get a bowl of that to eat right now! You used great descriptive words and amazing imagery that looked so real. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024

Thank you, Teri.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

There is nothing more refreshing on a summer day than sorbet. Your essence poem describes it beautifully in only eight words. I like both your internal and end rhymes. Rod

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024

Thank you, Rod.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

Actually, I always say good luck in the contest, but I think your entry is very good

You wouldn't believe some of the entries I see for contests.

I like sorbet and at Costco you can get a box of sorbets

Each flavor has its own fruit that it's put inside. So you have lemon pomegranate in half of a lemon, a real lemon

And then you have orange mango scooped into a real orangeorange. And you have coconut in half of a coconut shell. That's my favorite. There is another one, but I can't think of what it is.

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024

Thank you, Pam. I'm going to look out for those at Costco. Thanks!