Paradigm Shift
Unexpected illness makes a rich man revise his priorities.3 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-Thanks for getting the form right
with all of the confusion.
-You have a good topic, internal rhyme
in each line, as well as end rhyme.
-You also have a good message about
the importance of health.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-Thanks for getting the form right
with all of the confusion.
-You have a good topic, internal rhyme
in each line, as well as end rhyme.
-You also have a good message about
the importance of health.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Many thanks, Pam.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Katiemae1977
Well done mystery poet! You've managed to do so well with this difficult prompt
I entered but I'm going to let it slide since I'm having too much trouble with writer's block on it
Best wishes to you in the contest!
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Well done mystery poet! You've managed to do so well with this difficult prompt
I entered but I'm going to let it slide since I'm having too much trouble with writer's block on it
Best wishes to you in the contest!
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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So kind. Very many thanks.
Comment from samantha0930
This is a nice, short poem, and it follows the contest prompt. It has a nice message, and you should focus on the things you need rather than being greedy. I also like the way you presented the poem; the image and the colors look really nice together.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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This is a nice, short poem, and it follows the contest prompt. It has a nice message, and you should focus on the things you need rather than being greedy. I also like the way you presented the poem; the image and the colors look really nice together.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Samantha.