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A Loop Poetry Contest6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I'm slightly confuse. I thought a Loop poem had four lines to a stanza and a rhyming scheme of ABCB. Maybe I'm wrong. Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I'm slightly confuse. I thought a Loop poem had four lines to a stanza and a rhyming scheme of ABCB. Maybe I'm wrong. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written loop poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely and colorful imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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This is a very well written loop poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely and colorful imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Deborah,
I like your inspirational, uplifting. Loop poem.
Your last line sums things up nicely; it gives the reader hope.
Great photo complementing your words.
Best wishes, Deborah,
Cindy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Deborah,
I like your inspirational, uplifting. Loop poem.
Your last line sums things up nicely; it gives the reader hope.
Great photo complementing your words.
Best wishes, Deborah,
Cindy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from SimianSavant
Hi, this is a nice visual poem but unfortunately it does not follow the format laid out in the contest you entered:
-4 lines
-lines 2 and 4 should rhyme
This low rating is to get your attention; message me back if you revise and I will revisit the rating. Thanks!
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Hi, this is a nice visual poem but unfortunately it does not follow the format laid out in the contest you entered:
-4 lines
-lines 2 and 4 should rhyme
This low rating is to get your attention; message me back if you revise and I will revisit the rating. Thanks!
🦍
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Isn't this a loop poem?
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Yes it's a loop poem but if you read the rules, they also say it needs to include a particular rhyming schematic as I described. I'm just trying to save you from getting disqualified.
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It's fine. I don't expect to win anything.
The same people always win. I just
write for myself.
Comment from Bill Schott
This loop poem, Moments, has the proper formatting and finds that when the curtain drops we will see that we did what couldn't have been planned to achieve but was done.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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This loop poem, Moments, has the proper formatting and finds that when the curtain drops we will see that we did what couldn't have been planned to achieve but was done.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. You got the message right. That is exactly what this poem is about.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your loop poetry has a nice flow and adheres to the loop poetry structure well. I have one suggestion for this line...
but either way I love it. Good luck :)
sad moments help us grow strong,
strong enough to do the impossible
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Your loop poetry has a nice flow and adheres to the loop poetry structure well. I have one suggestion for this line...
but either way I love it. Good luck :)
sad moments help us grow strong,
strong enough to do the impossible
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you for liking my poem and suggesting a change in the last line. I appreciate your remarks.
