Comment from samantha0930

Good

The line "your love mojo" feels like it interrupts the poem, stopping the flow. Probably because it reads, "with your love. / your love mojo" so it's repeating words you just used. (And that line isn't capitalized since it starts a sentence, like in your other capital lines.) Maybe it could say something like "Your enchanting ways / still working overtime." instead. And I'm not sure if you mean "overtime" like "We worked 10 hours of overtime this week" or "It has survived over time", because it could be one word or two words depending what you mean. The contest also says that you're supposed to have two stanzas in your poem, and here you just have one, and idk if it would get disqualified for that. The title should also be about the context of your poem, rather than just stating what format of poem you're writing.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024

thanks for the fair critique I have edited the poem accordingly

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I wonder where the divide between the two stanzas is. I do like the poem, though, and it looks like you got the word count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024

thanks I will fix that glitch

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This septolet, Love, has the proper formatting and suggests that whatever was unleashed to secure a romantic connection back when is still enforce now.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024

thanks a lot