2024 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 164 "Even the Breeze"x
8 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
There is an enormous amount of beauty in this piece, Gypsy, as well as the artwork. You work magic, my friend, and I hope everyone who reads your work feels the same way.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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There is an enormous amount of beauty in this piece, Gypsy, as well as the artwork. You work magic, my friend, and I hope everyone who reads your work feels the same way.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve 😊
Gypsy
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Always a pleasure.
Comment from shelley kaye
yea, i can see that
great imagery of the wind stopping for a moment...
cool gazelle haiku with smooth flow
i like the triangle shape - ending in 'passes by'
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
on a personal note, this review just bumped me up to reviewer level 92 (next star is at 98) LOL!!!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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yea, i can see that
great imagery of the wind stopping for a moment...
cool gazelle haiku with smooth flow
i like the triangle shape - ending in 'passes by'
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
on a personal note, this review just bumped me up to reviewer level 92 (next star is at 98) LOL!!!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Congratulations!
Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
The grace of a gazelle would definitely leave you breathless. I feel that way about deer. They are amazing in their gratefulness. The imagery was spectacular and I love how the breeze became a character. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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The grace of a gazelle would definitely leave you breathless. I feel that way about deer. They are amazing in their gratefulness. The imagery was spectacular and I love how the breeze became a character. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Gazelles are beautiful creatures and always so graceful. Your presentation and your poem are as beautiful as ever. I am so grateful that you choose to share your talent with us. My novel that has your poem inside the front cover should be published in the next couple of days. I'll let you know, when it is. I will send you a signed copy.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Gazelles are beautiful creatures and always so graceful. Your presentation and your poem are as beautiful as ever. I am so grateful that you choose to share your talent with us. My novel that has your poem inside the front cover should be published in the next couple of days. I'll let you know, when it is. I will send you a signed copy.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Oh, wow, Barbara, that is very kind of you. I will treasure it.
Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Such beauty is a God given gift. This animal is so beautiful, and yet so very powerful, a testament to some thing in life. Well done.
Amazing presentation.
RJ
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Such beauty is a God given gift. This animal is so beautiful, and yet so very powerful, a testament to some thing in life. Well done.
Amazing presentation.
RJ
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That is such a graceful animal. I like how you use hyperbole to show how much the beautiful animal causes even wind to stop blowing at the sight of the lovely gazelle.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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That is such a graceful animal. I like how you use hyperbole to show how much the beautiful animal causes even wind to stop blowing at the sight of the lovely gazelle.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it.
Love ❤️
Marival
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem has good imagery and good sensory appeal.
Every once in a while, even Natures is captured in awe. Well done.
Beautiful presentation. Xo. M
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem has good imagery and good sensory appeal.
Every once in a while, even Natures is captured in awe. Well done.
Beautiful presentation. Xo. M
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, M.
Gypsy hugs 🤗
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This!
I often read these and most of the times they feel forced. This is beautiful. It truly captures the moment ( at least my moments) of when I see a wild animal. I have very very few poems saved from here but this just went on my desktop love it!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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This!
I often read these and most of the times they feel forced. This is beautiful. It truly captures the moment ( at least my moments) of when I see a wild animal. I have very very few poems saved from here but this just went on my desktop love it!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Patty. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I'm honored that you kept the poem on your desktop
Gypsy hugs 😊