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Finding my Inner Peace

For Gypsy's Finding Your Muse Club

47 total reviews 
Comment from Shanbreen
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Such a well-written soothing poem, Debi. I don't know much about syllable count but I am glad to know that comfortable can be said your way or mine. =). Yes, we all strive for inner peace. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Shanbreen,I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from estory
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It's a great celebration of faith, and finding peace and relief in the knowledge that God is there, looking out for you. You had a nice soft cadence, a sublime rhythm, and that underpinned the poem. estory

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Estory, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Nice one Debi. Like the image as well. Inner Peace is certainly a way to go and make your life really buzz. Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Barry, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Debi, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem of faith. The artwork is amazing and draws us into the experience of finding inner peace through love of God. I love the part about being comfortable in your own skin!!

Great job, my friend.
Have a great vacation,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Dearest Rhonda, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from Janet Foor
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My first granddaughter and I used to have that conversation about "comfortable." She liked the three count and I preferred four. It became a fun conversation as we each defended our opinion.
I enjoyed your "Finding Inner peace" poem. Much food for thought.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Janet, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from pome lover
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very good Miss Debi,
Heartfelt and lots of rhyming :)
Inner peace is a wonderful thing to have. I'm glad you feel it.
Congratulations on All Time Best. I believe you're the champion in that category!
Hope you're doing all right.
K

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Kay, LOL, the only reason I get the ATB each time is because I promote big.
    I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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I'm curious what is sin? I like your third to the last stanza. I often say if only people would believe that then we wouldn't have any problems. Thank you for being vulnerable.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
    Oh Liz, you are so sweet and I am sorry for being so late with this but I got behind and then my family was on a vacation. So thanks again for all the kind words. Love and hugs, dear friend. Debi
reply by Liz O'Neill on 06-Aug-2024
    Vacations are allowed for
Comment from wilkswrites
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Very nicely said, and well-written.
You said so much; your message is clear.
I enjoyed reading this and needed to hear it.

Thank you for sharing.
Vernell

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
    Vernell, thank you so very much for your lovely review and words for my inner peace poem. I am always so happy to meet a fellow Christian. Especially here among our family of writers. Thank you also for the gift of your six stars. They are so appreciated. Thank you so much and I will be over to fan you soon. Love, Debi
Comment from Neonewman
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God is my inner peace as well, and should be everyone's. This is an excellent piece you have delivered, my friend. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Steve, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
reply by Neonewman on 04-Aug-2024
    My pleasure, Debi.
Comment from QC Poet
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This is a very encouraging and enjoyable poem to read and rate very fitting for Fibding your inner peace writing prompt. Thank you for Sharing your submission with all FS members

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Dear QC, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi