Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Haha! Great! I really enjoyed your take on this. Your dialogue is excellent and you brought your fun characters to life with aplomb! And a great punchline at the end. What's not to like? Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024

Thank you for the great review, Debbie. I really appreciate the generous stars. I had a blast writing this silliness. I'm glad you liked it.

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Comment from RodG

Excellent

Well, Writer, you definitely have an imagination. Poor Eve was lovely to look at, but much too malleable as the snake had no problem convincing her to bite that apple. Your surprise ending had me chuckling and saying, "The couple deserved that." Rod

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024

Thank you for the great review, Rod. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.

Comment from s.m.kirby

Excellent

I read this and thought you did a good job rewriting In the beginning. I noticed that in the second to last part when the T-rex snapper her up should it be snapped her up. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024

Thank you for the great review and for catching the goof, SMK. I really appreciate it. I'm glad you liked this silliness.

reply by s.m.kirby on 30-Jul-2024

You're welcome,