Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Life does continue, even when we sleep through it. It's funny that way. LOL Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation and poem with us. Once again, your talent amazes me.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

We are often overly concerned about what important part our lives bring to the functioning of the world around us. Truth be told, life will do just fine in our absence, it has for millions of years. I like your use of metaphorical expression and rich color tones.
RJ

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I hate to sleep in. I always feel like I've missed the good part of the day. I spend the rest of the day running to catch up. It's how I was brought up, I suppose. You didn't waste daylight. This was great. I enjoyed the vignette of life gong on as usual while the heroine slept in. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024

I stay up late and wake up around 9 or 10..I have ever been that way. After my mother died, my dad didn't do much parenting so nobody cared how late we slept, until he put me to work at 13 years old. I was always behind in school advancement 1 ir 2 grades behind and I was so embarrassed at school, I hated it it. But when I moved in with my aunt I catch up. Now I have a bachelor's degree.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

well, if you're not a morning person, than you're not a morning person LOL!

cool dreamy poem
smooth flow with good alliteration

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

I go to sleep late and get up late. 😊

Thank you very much, Shelley

Gypsy hugs 🙂

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

This is another beautiful piece you have crafted, Gypsy. We used to see fields of Sunflowers when we visited relatives in New Mexico. All of the faced the same way and followed the sun daily.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

Thank you very much, Steve

Gypsy hugs 🙂

Comment from Patty Mazzurco

Excellent

This poem beautifully captures the quiet yet profound moments of a morning that goes unnoticed. The imagery of dew-kissed flowers and sparrows singing love songs creates a serene, almost magical atmosphere. The contrast between the vibrant morning and the speaker's delayed awakening highlights a gentle reminder of life's ongoing beauty, even when we're not fully present. Your use of vivid imagery and the notion of "morning miracles" offers a tender reflection on the simple yet significant moments that continue regardless of our personal distractions. It's a lovely piece that eloquently celebrates the small wonders of nature and the passage of time.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

Thank you very much, Patty. I appreciate the detailed feedback and awesome review.

Gypsy hugs 🙂

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. I can relate! I prefer sleeping in and often go to bed too late to wake up for early morning events. I don't know when I saw the sun wake up last. Enjoyed your lovely poem of those early morning miracles!

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

Hahaha.... I'm like you, i stay up late at night and I like to wake up late....around 9 during the week and 10 in the weekend.

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love ❤️

Marival