2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Neonewman
Yes, I guess they would. I would imagine making love on a boat would be an interesting ordeal, to say the least. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy.
God bless.
Steve
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Yes, I guess they would. I would imagine making love on a boat would be an interesting ordeal, to say the least. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy.
God bless.
Steve
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve
Gypsy hugs 🙂
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My pleasure.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Comparing a sailboat's movement on sea to making love is pure genius. Thank you for sharing this sensual poem with us. The presentation is wonderful. Great job.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Comparing a sailboat's movement on sea to making love is pure genius. Thank you for sharing this sensual poem with us. The presentation is wonderful. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs 🙂
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Beautiful and sexy in equal measure. Nature, both of the sea and of the human kind, blend together in glorious harmony. And some humour in your 4th line:) Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Beautiful and sexy in equal measure. Nature, both of the sea and of the human kind, blend together in glorious harmony. And some humour in your 4th line:) Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy hugs 🙂
Comment from RJ Heritage
Well, can't say I can relate, hum, perhaps, I can. Beautifully illustrated and presented as always. There are secrets and whispers that we tell and or keep that are carried away, lost by in the waves of time.
Thank you for posting.
RJ
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Well, can't say I can relate, hum, perhaps, I can. Beautifully illustrated and presented as always. There are secrets and whispers that we tell and or keep that are carried away, lost by in the waves of time.
Thank you for posting.
RJ
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs 🙂
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
umm... this is 5 lines and 20 syllables -- did you mean gogyohka? (your put the senryu rules in your notes lol)
anyway, this was a very cool poem
love the moans and whispers floating on the waves imagery
smooth flow
cool pics and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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umm... this is 5 lines and 20 syllables -- did you mean gogyohka? (your put the senryu rules in your notes lol)
anyway, this was a very cool poem
love the moans and whispers floating on the waves imagery
smooth flow
cool pics and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Oh Lord, thank you for paying attention. LoL nobody else noticed. It's a gogyohka poem.
Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs 🙂
Comment from royowen
Another emotional post dear friend, the best person I know on site that deals so well with the depth of feelings as you do, such great language as always ding so well, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Another emotional post dear friend, the best person I know on site that deals so well with the depth of feelings as you do, such great language as always ding so well, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
That sounds sensuous. I guess the waves of the waters and the waves of the lovemaking seem to go together as long as no one is seasick. Beautifully illustrated!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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That sounds sensuous. I guess the waves of the waters and the waves of the lovemaking seem to go together as long as no one is seasick. Beautifully illustrated!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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LoL... yes, they do. Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival ❤️