Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Yes, I guess they would. I would imagine making love on a boat would be an interesting ordeal, to say the least. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy.
God bless.
Steve

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

Thank you very much, Steve

Gypsy hugs 🙂

reply by Neonewman on 29-Jul-2024

My pleasure.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Comparing a sailboat's movement on sea to making love is pure genius. Thank you for sharing this sensual poem with us. The presentation is wonderful. Great job.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

Thank you very much, Barbara

Gypsy hugs 🙂

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Beautiful and sexy in equal measure. Nature, both of the sea and of the human kind, blend together in glorious harmony. And some humour in your 4th line:) Well done, Gypsy! Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

Thank you very much, Debbie

Gypsy hugs 🙂

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Well, can't say I can relate, hum, perhaps, I can. Beautifully illustrated and presented as always. There are secrets and whispers that we tell and or keep that are carried away, lost by in the waves of time.
Thank you for posting.
RJ

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

Thank you very much, RJ

Gypsy hugs 🙂

reply by RJ Heritage on 29-Jul-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

umm... this is 5 lines and 20 syllables -- did you mean gogyohka? (your put the senryu rules in your notes lol)

anyway, this was a very cool poem
love the moans and whispers floating on the waves imagery
smooth flow
cool pics and colours

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

Oh Lord, thank you for paying attention. LoL nobody else noticed. It's a gogyohka poem.

Thank you very much, Shelley

Gypsy hugs 🙂

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Another emotional post dear friend, the best person I know on site that deals so well with the depth of feelings as you do, such great language as always ding so well, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

Thank you very much, Roy

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 29-Jul-2024

Most welcome

reply by royowen on 29-Jul-2024

Most welcome

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That sounds sensuous. I guess the waves of the waters and the waves of the lovemaking seem to go together as long as no one is seasick. Beautifully illustrated!

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

LoL... yes, they do. Thank you very much, big sister.

Love
Marival ❤️