Danger is my business
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "At risk of Electrocution"Most everything Mickey did was dangerous.
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Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Liz
I was surprised by the introduction of Mickey. I know I had missed some chapters and I think maybe he was in a previous chapter somewhere.
I guess you're going to put more of what happened to Hank in one of the other chapters. I believe he got electrocuted because of the tree sap
You should never shelter under a tree when there's lightning either.
My grandfather On my mother's side, died that way He sheltered under a tree in a lightning storm and got electrocuted three months before she was born she never knew him
So I guess we'll find out later what happens to Hank and how he ends up with his minor brain injury
Here. It should be rather not other.
" Other than being appreciative for his cordiality, she just huffed and "
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Hi, Liz
I was surprised by the introduction of Mickey. I know I had missed some chapters and I think maybe he was in a previous chapter somewhere.
I guess you're going to put more of what happened to Hank in one of the other chapters. I believe he got electrocuted because of the tree sap
You should never shelter under a tree when there's lightning either.
My grandfather On my mother's side, died that way He sheltered under a tree in a lightning storm and got electrocuted three months before she was born she never knew him
So I guess we'll find out later what happens to Hank and how he ends up with his minor brain injury
Here. It should be rather not other.
" Other than being appreciative for his cordiality, she just huffed and "
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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I'm writing this book because my brother who is head injured only remembers good times before he was 40. He got his TBI traumatic brain injury when he was 40 so he's been fighting his brain for many years. The first chapter focuses on the stages that he had to go through when he was recovering. Much of the rest is about his life before he was 40. Thank you for reading it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing offers a clear account of your brother Mike's experiences. I thought you did an excellent job of capturing both the dangers of his work and his remarkable resilience. Your portrayal of Mike's dedication, both on the job and in his ministry, shows his strength and compassion. I appreciate your effort in shedding light on these important issues, and your writing leaves a lasting impression. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Your writing offers a clear account of your brother Mike's experiences. I thought you did an excellent job of capturing both the dangers of his work and his remarkable resilience. Your portrayal of Mike's dedication, both on the job and in his ministry, shows his strength and compassion. I appreciate your effort in shedding light on these important issues, and your writing leaves a lasting impression. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you Michael, I'm quite humbled by your supportive review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"storms with"? Do not know if something omitted here or not.
When one deals with the public never know what they may encounter.
"Poplar tree" does not require capitalization.
Seems to jump from one topic to another without much tie-in offered.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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"storms with"? Do not know if something omitted here or not.
When one deals with the public never know what they may encounter.
"Poplar tree" does not require capitalization.
Seems to jump from one topic to another without much tie-in offered.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your alert review. I will attend to your observations
Comment from BethShelby
It sound like Mike is good person and I'm sorry he had to sustain a brain injury. it is good that you are writing these things about his life. Like you say we are learning about the dangers of the job and all what it means to have a brain injury.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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It sound like Mike is good person and I'm sorry he had to sustain a brain injury. it is good that you are writing these things about his life. Like you say we are learning about the dangers of the job and all what it means to have a brain injury.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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. Thank you for your supportive review step is my goal to show the good parts to of him and also show how sad it is that he has deteriorated.
Comment from lyenochka
I hope that the "thief" will pay back four fold like it says to do in the Bible!
Thanks for the helpful information! I appreciate the power workers who risk their lives to get electricity back on after storms. I didn't know that the electricity could flow inside the tree despite the wood around it. Bless Mickey for spreading the Good News!
Suggestions:
he he continued to readjust them (remove one 'he')
handing out Bible tracks (tracts)
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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I hope that the "thief" will pay back four fold like it says to do in the Bible!
Thanks for the helpful information! I appreciate the power workers who risk their lives to get electricity back on after storms. I didn't know that the electricity could flow inside the tree despite the wood around it. Bless Mickey for spreading the Good News!
Suggestions:
he he continued to readjust them (remove one 'he')
handing out Bible tracks (tracts)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Thank for thank you for your insightful review. I wondered if that was the way to spell tracts. I didn't think to ask my brother. He would definitely know he is so intelligent even with his head injury is so much more intelligent than I am.
Comment from joann r romei
I understand the dangers of this field of work, my son is an electrician and I worry daily about all sorts of hazards that can occur. no errors noted in the piece
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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I understand the dangers of this field of work, my son is an electrician and I worry daily about all sorts of hazards that can occur. no errors noted in the piece
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your compassionate review. Thank you for your vulnerability. We will put a shield of protection around your son.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You have given us all sorts of insight and information in this post. I can't wait until we get to put it all together. This is a good write and thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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You have given us all sorts of insight and information in this post. I can't wait until we get to put it all together. This is a good write and thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your supportive review.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I can remember a young apprentice electrician dying because he was a tad careless, and I can remember also needing to access something on s building site, and having to wear a helmet, thanks for posting, I never thought of sap being a conductor, well done Liz, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Oh yes, I can remember a young apprentice electrician dying because he was a tad careless, and I can remember also needing to access something on s building site, and having to wear a helmet, thanks for posting, I never thought of sap being a conductor, well done Liz, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad you could relate.
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Well done
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Thank you for your supportive review
Comment from jim vecchio
All these installments are of above-average quality. I learned lot about the flow of electricity in this one. Ad, as a disabled person who has lost grocery money, I feel for Mickey's loss. Keep these chapters coming.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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All these installments are of above-average quality. I learned lot about the flow of electricity in this one. Ad, as a disabled person who has lost grocery money, I feel for Mickey's loss. Keep these chapters coming.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your involved review. Thank you for your compassion oh it's Sunday so you can give me this shiny six thank you.
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I appreciate your sensitive and knowledgeable writing.
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We don't have to play "Can you top this?" (a game my college housemates used to play). Just checking in and letting me know you're okay is fine.
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Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and it has some very good advice in it about those who work in dangerous situations like those who restore power after a storm. I enjoyed reading it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing may you have a wonderful week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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This is very well written, and it has some very good advice in it about those who work in dangerous situations like those who restore power after a storm. I enjoyed reading it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing may you have a wonderful week. Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your involved review I'm glad you enjoyed it.
