Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi,rainbewLatte

This is my favorite chapter so far. It is so well written that it's amazing.

I didn't know what a crossing was until you used it later on. I think you also defined it as an encounter.

I should be like some people and read the notes first, but it actually wasn't in the notes. It was in a separate line that made it obvious they were connected.

I just thought this chapter pulls the reader in. It was very livable as if you were living the situation.

Here. Never was

"had knowledge of but never clarified to me. So, go me"

I enjoyed reading your book chapter

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024

Greetings! I'm glad! Wouldn't personally say that it's "so well written" (feel like my work is ridden with mediocrity at best) but real glad you enjoyed and liked this one. Thanks for the review, and most of all, thanks for the read!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

What a lovely moment in time here as you encountered an old acquaintance with a fine compliment to boot! Much enjoyed, an endearing and magical tale, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024

Thank you ever so much! Gratitude.