Just like Mama
The resemblance is uncanny8 total reviews
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
Well, this is a real shocker! It packs a hilarious punch, and conflict resolution in the way of case dismissed, delivered with a red face- perfect! Maddy
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Well, this is a real shocker! It packs a hilarious punch, and conflict resolution in the way of case dismissed, delivered with a red face- perfect! Maddy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Just Like Mama, has the proper word count and finds a father's potential advice shot down in flames in the presence of bad information heard just prior to another assault situation.
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This one-hundred-word story, Just Like Mama, has the proper word count and finds a father's potential advice shot down in flames in the presence of bad information heard just prior to another assault situation.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
Comment from lancellot
Well, this one takes a huge amount of suspension of disbelief. Now, considering that, the joke is well setup and I think you have all the asked for elements for a complete flash fiction story.
Good luck in the voting.
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Well, this one takes a huge amount of suspension of disbelief. Now, considering that, the joke is well setup and I think you have all the asked for elements for a complete flash fiction story.
Good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You rat! This is as good as mine. I thought I might have to vote for myself because I had not seen a decent one yet. Here's your six. Have a good week.
Karen
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You rat! This is as good as mine. I thought I might have to vote for myself because I had not seen a decent one yet. Here's your six. Have a good week.
Karen
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is hysterical. I don't think I have read a funnier flash. Everything is here - great description, dialogue, build-up to the twist at the end. This gets my vote.
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This is hysterical. I don't think I have read a funnier flash. Everything is here - great description, dialogue, build-up to the twist at the end. This gets my vote.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from SimianSavant
LOL nice. This should do well in the contest. Nicely paced with one hell of a punchline, this packs quite a bit into 100 words. Thanks for the fun read,
SS
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LOL nice. This should do well in the contest. Nicely paced with one hell of a punchline, this packs quite a bit into 100 words. Thanks for the fun read,
SS
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Loved the humour here and your little story made me chuckle, good luck with the contest, having the power to dismiss this case sounds like a privilege, love Dolly x
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Loved the humour here and your little story made me chuckle, good luck with the contest, having the power to dismiss this case sounds like a privilege, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
OMG lol Well that was definitely a surprise twist ending and I loved it! Great entry for the 100 Word Dash writing prompt. Great job. I'm still chuckling.
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OMG lol Well that was definitely a surprise twist ending and I loved it! Great entry for the 100 Word Dash writing prompt. Great job. I'm still chuckling.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024