The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Our Moment"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed this chapter. Your ability to weave together emotion is remarkable. The chemistry between Taya and Demi feels authentic. You did a great job writing their intimate moment with the worry of the danger in their world.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed this chapter. Your ability to weave together emotion is remarkable. The chemistry between Taya and Demi feels authentic. You did a great job writing their intimate moment with the worry of the danger in their world.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much! I always enjoy reading your comments :)
Comment from jim vecchio
I never would've suspected this! Taya and Demi alone in the room, and they don't even play cards or anything. Well, I guess it had to happen. What else could they do? I'm sure the first time won't be the only time.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I never would've suspected this! Taya and Demi alone in the room, and they don't even play cards or anything. Well, I guess it had to happen. What else could they do? I'm sure the first time won't be the only time.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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lol surprise! To be honest, I wasn't going to originally show this aspect of their relationship but then I was like "Why not?" It's not for kids anyways.
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It happens to everyone eventually. Just not so dramatically.