Crissy and The Bear Family
Retelling of Goldilocks and the 3 Bears6 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Goldilocks was so upset that her mind went astray and she lost touch with reality.
Her transpassing got her into trouble.
It sounds like the Goldilocks because The Cambridge Dictionary had this under Goldilocks-that it was
"used to describe a situation in which something is or has to be exactly right."
The picture is beautiful and how you wrote your story is nice.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Goldilocks was so upset that her mind went astray and she lost touch with reality.
Her transpassing got her into trouble.
It sounds like the Goldilocks because The Cambridge Dictionary had this under Goldilocks-that it was
"used to describe a situation in which something is or has to be exactly right."
The picture is beautiful and how you wrote your story is nice.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, your kindness is appreciated.
Comment from pome lover
spoiled brat learns a lesson? who knows. Stranger things have happened, but it's a good story with an ending of what should happen.
I wonder if she got her Mercedes back :)
Good entry for the contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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spoiled brat learns a lesson? who knows. Stranger things have happened, but it's a good story with an ending of what should happen.
I wonder if she got her Mercedes back :)
Good entry for the contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is certainly a modern uptake on the tail Goldilocks and the three bears. Or should I say Chrissylock and the three Bears?
We've always wondered what happened to Goldilocks after she was discovered at the three Bears house. We never knew she went to jail rather than being eaten. I think we all assumed that Goldilocks would be eaten since they would still be hungry since she ate their breakfast.
Very clever, retelling
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is certainly a modern uptake on the tail Goldilocks and the three bears. Or should I say Chrissylock and the three Bears?
We've always wondered what happened to Goldilocks after she was discovered at the three Bears house. We never knew she went to jail rather than being eaten. I think we all assumed that Goldilocks would be eaten since they would still be hungry since she ate their breakfast.
Very clever, retelling
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for a very fine review.
Comment from jessizero
I thoroughly enjoyed this retelling of "Goldilocks and the Three Bears." You really made me feel for the bears and not so much for Crissy. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I thoroughly enjoyed this retelling of "Goldilocks and the Three Bears." You really made me feel for the bears and not so much for Crissy. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you Jessizero. I would call you Jess or Jessi, but do not want to offend you. I appreciate your kind response.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your retelling is so clever. I love the modern twist to this classic fairy tale. I thought your story gave this a fresh and humorous. And you do a great job of keeping the heart of the story and the lessons taught in your take of it. Great job!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Your retelling is so clever. I love the modern twist to this classic fairy tale. I thought your story gave this a fresh and humorous. And you do a great job of keeping the heart of the story and the lessons taught in your take of it. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you Michael. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from jmdg1954
Okay. I found your retelling of Goldielocks and the Three Bears story interesting with a good "and the moral to the story" ending.
Interesting names and set in truer times for today.
A good contest entry. Best of luck in the voting.
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Okay. I found your retelling of Goldielocks and the Three Bears story interesting with a good "and the moral to the story" ending.
Interesting names and set in truer times for today.
A good contest entry. Best of luck in the voting.
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you John, I appreciate your thoughts.
