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Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Salvation"
poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings

6 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, we are all God's children, and we are all saved because Jesus died on the cross and defeated death for us. All we need to do is to have faith. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Thank you for the review and good luck I appreciate it.
Comment from jessizero
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I think this was a beautiful cinquain for the contest. You seem to have gotten the syllable counts right, and your message was wonderful. I especially liked how you capitalized "FOR ME" to emphasize it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your review and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This cinquain, Salvation, has the proper formatting and brings the suitable feeling to the fact that the burden of sin on one's soul has been lifted. Hooray!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your review. I do appreciate it. Hope you have a geat day.
Comment from patcelaw
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What is a poem for the contest? I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely weekend and may God bless all of your writing. God bless. Patricia.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
    Patricia, thank you for your review and best wishes. I really do appreciate them. I often wish I was able to write as well as you and others on here. God bless you. Sanda
Comment from Katiemae1977
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Very nice use of the form poet and o f course I love your subject matter. It reads smoothly and the lines connect nicely
Good luck and God bless
Katiemae1977

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it. I Hope you have a good day.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Amen, my friend!! What a wonderful reminder of the sacrifice of our Lord to free us from our sins and to give us new life. The blood of the flawless lamb, given freely to us all.

Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
    Rhonda, thank you for your review, I do appreciate it.