Please, Mama
Inspired by this precious photo.11 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love the reasoning behind the child's request. Thinking ahead to cold weather. This had a delightful aire of innocence to it. Thank you sharing. Have a great Sunday. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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I love the reasoning behind the child's request. Thinking ahead to cold weather. This had a delightful aire of innocence to it. Thank you sharing. Have a great Sunday. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your delightful review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A touching Cinquain poem with clever pairing of image and word.
The wording clearly expresses the feelings such a cute image creates- cute, sweet, cuddly.
The image itself is so darn cute it would melt the heart of adult and child alike.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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A touching Cinquain poem with clever pairing of image and word.
The wording clearly expresses the feelings such a cute image creates- cute, sweet, cuddly.
The image itself is so darn cute it would melt the heart of adult and child alike.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for stopping by and reviewing my work and leaving such a nice review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Shopping with kids can be a nightmare as times when they want everything they see! I remember when my eldest daughter was a toddler and she had a fit in a departments store when I said no to her. She lay on the floor and screamed her head off! It was embarrassing but I did not give in. A fun poem Patricia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Shopping with kids can be a nightmare as times when they want everything they see! I remember when my eldest daughter was a toddler and she had a fit in a departments store when I said no to her. She lay on the floor and screamed her head off! It was embarrassing but I did not give in. A fun poem Patricia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it. Have a good week
Comment from Lisa Carter1
I love this pretty Teddybear. It reminds me of those Christmas bears that they sell each year with the year date on their paws. I want it to have it to hold forever more
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I love this pretty Teddybear. It reminds me of those Christmas bears that they sell each year with the year date on their paws. I want it to have it to hold forever more
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work at such a nice review. Appreciate it.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, we have heard that kind of plea so many times, haven't we? But as grandmas, we're more likely to be persuaded. That's a cute picture for your cinquain.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Oh, we have heard that kind of plea so many times, haven't we? But as grandmas, we're more likely to be persuaded. That's a cute picture for your cinquain.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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With gratitude in my heart wish to thank you for a nice
Comment from gansach
I like your cinquain poem very much, Patricia. What an adorable teddy bear and who wouldn't want to cuddle with it. This is a very nice presentation, attractive to the eye. Well done!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I like your cinquain poem very much, Patricia. What an adorable teddy bear and who wouldn't want to cuddle with it. This is a very nice presentation, attractive to the eye. Well done!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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It is always a blessing to get nice reviews like this. Thank you so much.
Comment from jim vecchio
I couldn't get that teddy for you, so I tried to send you some virtual teddy bears. This response box wouldn't accept them. Sorry. I often wonder what happened to my teddy that was so precious when I was a toddler. This was a delightful cinquain.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I couldn't get that teddy for you, so I tried to send you some virtual teddy bears. This response box wouldn't accept them. Sorry. I often wonder what happened to my teddy that was so precious when I was a toddler. This was a delightful cinquain.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read this and giving it a nice review.
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Have a Blessed weekend!
Comment from RJ Heritage
I definitely can see why a child could want such a beautiful teddy bear. Beautiful expression of warmth and love in a toy and keepsake, still have mine he is at least 55 years old. Well my grandson has him now.
Thanks for posting.
RJ
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I definitely can see why a child could want such a beautiful teddy bear. Beautiful expression of warmth and love in a toy and keepsake, still have mine he is at least 55 years old. Well my grandson has him now.
Thanks for posting.
RJ
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for reviewing my work such a
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a sweet poem, Patricia. I can almost hear a little girl asking her mommy for that precious toy bear. The picture is adorable. If I still had my teddy bear collection it would have made a nice addition. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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What a sweet poem, Patricia. I can almost hear a little girl asking her mommy for that precious toy bear. The picture is adorable. If I still had my teddy bear collection it would have made a nice addition. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Your reviews are always important to me. Thank you so much.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AHHHHHH. I want that teddy bear to hold tightly. Thank you for sharing this very happy and adorable poem with us. I enjoyed reading. It made my day.
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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AHHHHHH. I want that teddy bear to hold tightly. Thank you for sharing this very happy and adorable poem with us. I enjoyed reading. It made my day.
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I am always grateful when I get nice reviews. This is thank you.
