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Sleepwalker

craving for a midnight snack

2 total reviews 
Comment from Katiemae1977
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I see you wrote a suite of three minute poems. Very effective use of the form
They read smoothly
All political opinions aside, I didn't know that about her

Best wishes in the contest
Katherine

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    You do now! Muhahaha. Thank you Katherine!
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Aha! This has a touch of one I know! I like the way you lured the reader in with sweetness and innocence before embarking on a deeper layer of political and animal cruelty. And there was I thinking she was ok:)) A proper Cruella! Take care and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Ah yes. Kamala and I share some genetic heritage in common, and we both like to lure people in. That's where the similarities end. Unless of course she is secretly part gorilla. Thank you!
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